{FIC} Behind the Closed Door (PROLOGUE)

[t3z4_b3rry2]

Title : Behind the Closed Door (PROLOGUE)
Author: Teza
Paring: Onkey (Onew Key)
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Jonghyun centric, cursing, un-betaed, first time writing.
Summary: Jonghyun is a straight guy who was really  pissed at the lovey-dovey act Key and Onew showed him everyday. So he tried to give them some lesson. Or may be just scold them abit.

Comments

[suika_fudo]

Hi..it's my first time to comment in fanfic so i don't know whether my comment is worth or not. From the title 'behind the closed door', it made me thought it's nc,hehehe, my dirty mind...

I like Taemin being wise in this situation to let onkey do their things. Or maybe that's because the iPhone?....

I like Jonghyun being jealous...so Jjong, go find someone for you. I'm here you know..hehehe

[t3z4_b3rry2]

Hiiii~~ babyyy~~ welcome to the world.. hahhahah~ :D
i'm glad i got your first comment ever.. this is so special. <3
I know you have the nc-minded. sorry, i'm disappointing you. It's PG, baby. :D
may be later.. kkkkk~

haha~ wisdom came from anykind of source baby. in Taemin's case, it came from iphone.

Hahaha~ i know you're there for Jonghyun. But, too bad.. Jonghyun is mine. kkkkk~ xD

[juphen]

lol
onkey doing something inside the room
and it's freak taemin life out,hmmm....i wonder what they've been doing??
actually i like their sleep arrangement
and you'd better update it,coz i want to know more kekekekeke

[t3z4_b3rry2]

yeah.. they defenitely did something inside the room.
I like the sleeping arrangemnent too~
umma and appa slept with their beautiful son, but when umma and appa wanted to do something more.. then, the first victim would be their son.. kkkkkk~ :D

sure.. you make me want to write more.
Thank you for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it. <3

[namae_nai]

you gotta continue his, right nowwwww

[t3z4_b3rry2]

Roger that, Sir! -.-)"> xD

btw, thank you for reading and commenting. <3

[akari_hayashi]

Taemin's such a dear~~~ Ah, the power of an iPhone.

He's right though, they should be able to at least be lovey-dovey in the privacy of their dorm. ;) Don't deny them, Jjong.

[t3z4_b3rry2]

lol
taemin had to ripe what he sow, since he agreed with it in the first place. xD

Well, they should be, because they won't be able to do it in other place.
But, Jonghyun was just a little worried with little Taeminnie.
he was still under-aged for those kinds of things. kkkkkk~ xD

btw, thank you for reading and commenting. <3

[fallegstelpa]

hi...............

a good prologue, sounds promising.

makes me curious about what is actually done onkey behind the door so make taemin must flee into the manager hyung's room for days and what is the reason jjong so pissed off ?

i'm sure will be many cute and funny moments in the next chapter.
if you have spare time, immediately went on this story, i look forward to.

see you at the next chapter and thanks for sharing this.

[t3z4_b3rry2]

ah~ please don't expect too much from me.
this is my first time writing fanfic.
but i'll try my best for the next chapters. heehee~ :3

well, you have to be patient for the explaination of what happened behind the closed door. Because it still won't be explained till next chapter.

ah~ sure. I'm actually working on chapter 2 right now.
but, chapter 1 won't be posted until chapter 2 finished. I hope you'll be patient.

btw, thank for reading and commenting. <3
see you in the next chapter. :3