Comments | t3h_w0lfy: Drabbles and fandom!squee!

t3h_w0lfy

Drabbles and fandom!squee!

Sep 08, 2007 13:26

Title: Lucky

Fandom: Final Fantasy VII

Claim: Tifa Lockhart

Prompt: #5, Lucky

Characters/Pairings: (mostly one-sided) Tifa/Shotgun (f)

Rating: G

Summary: Tifa had always dreamed of adventures. Now, she’s about to get one.

Author’s Notes: I wanted to write young Tifa.

Spoilers for Episode 12 of Before Crisis, if that’s something that ( Read more... )

squee!, fandom, 10lilies

Comments 6

venefica_aura September 8 2007, 23:44:38 UTC

I hope you don't mind me popping in.

You probably write the most adorable young!Tifa I've ever seen. Considering she's my first video game crush, I'm always a little skeptical to read newer stuff I've never heard of. But since you had Shotgun (F) (another favorite of mine) I figured this would be interesting.

I like that Tifa is not automatically brave (she's 15! I remember being 15, and I was a bit of a coward then) but not entirely damselish.

I love the reference to fairytales. I've read a lot of them. XD

This was cute and fit pretty well in canon. Good work!

~Cendri

t3h_w0lfy September 9 2007, 17:01:31 UTC

Heheh, I video game crush Tifa, too, can you tell?

Wow, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.

And another random commenter drakonlily September 8 2007, 23:59:51 UTC

I was linked from Cendri. *waves* I'm Kas.

I'm impressed. I'm always happy to see small fandoms that I enjoy get good writers. I loved your flow and your style is very clear and easy to follow. Tifa is amazingly well done. Sure she's a great fighter in game, but she's a 15 year old girl in this. It shows. There are minor bumps in your grammar, but the style is overall solid.

I'll echo the previous comment that the little nods to fairytales and the believable lead in with the cat were good too.

Keep up the good work!

Re: And another random commenter t3h_w0lfy September 9 2007, 17:12:42 UTC

Hi, nice to meet you. Mind if I add you as a friend?

Wow, thanks for all the praise. You're making me blush.
I tried to catch all the grammar issues when I was editing it, but I was being kinda lazy. I don't doubt I missed a few.

Thank you, I'll give it my best!

Re: And another random commenter drakonlily September 13 2007, 17:31:21 UTC

You sure can! Warning, I'm boring. ;)

Re: And another random commenter t3h_w0lfy September 13 2007, 22:13:29 UTC

Well, so am I!