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It Didn't Start Like This - Chapter Three

May 25, 2007 14:42

Title: It Didn't Start Like This
Rating: G
Spoilers: Boomtown

Betaed by jadesfire2808.

A/N This chapter made jadesfire giggle on the bus. *does happy dance*

Chapter Three )

ianto jones, fandom, mickey smith, boomtown, rose, doctor who, jack harkness, doctor - nine

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crystalshard May 25 2007, 14:20:49 UTC
That last line is priceless. I love Ianto's comment about all his reports being fascinating.

Nice one.

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szm May 25 2007, 20:45:42 UTC
Owen's expense claims are marvelous works of fiction. *grin*

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

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schizojuc May 25 2007, 14:48:06 UTC
hehe! Love the flirting!

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szm May 25 2007, 20:46:58 UTC
Thank you!

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shara50 May 25 2007, 15:57:38 UTC
That was absolutey fabulous. I loved the last line and adore Ianto in this. He just perfect.

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szm May 25 2007, 20:48:40 UTC
*suggles Ianto* he's wonderful isn't he?

Thank you very much.

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tanarian May 25 2007, 16:43:54 UTC
Oh, I adore this! So many lines to enjoy that i can't begin to quote them all but I'm glad Ianto faced Margaret down. Yeah, right, like suddenly getting someone killed is soooo wrong when she was going to make toast of the entire Earth?! Hah!

Love the bit about the expense account for the strippers and Jack's reaction and Ianto's response. And, of course, that marvellous, marvellous last line.

So when's the next bit going to be up, eh? Eh?

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szm May 25 2007, 20:53:11 UTC
*kicks Margaret*

Thank you, glad you liked it. I really wanted someone to face Margaret down, she tryed to blow the earth up!

erm... next bit?

Only teasing! Should be a couple of days.

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cyberamanda May 25 2007, 17:22:01 UTC
I'm not sure why I hadn't been aware of this until now, but I'm glad I finally read it. The humour is excellent. You write Ianto brilliantly! Can't wait til the next chapter :-)

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szm May 25 2007, 20:59:35 UTC
Currently it only posted on my journal because the first part was written for tw_flashfic and I'm not supposed to post that anywhere until the challenge is finished.

Thank you! I love writng Ianto, I definately find him easiest.

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