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Fic - We're Not Friends

Jun 08, 2012 00:12

Title: We're Not Friends
Author: szm
Charaters: John, Lestrade, Donovan, Kitty
Rating: G
Spoilers: End of series two
Disclaimer: It all belongs to the BBC. Not me. No money is made from this.

We're Not Friends )

sally donovan, greg lestrade, kitty reilly, fiction, john watson, sherlock

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Comments 9

keerawa June 8 2012, 05:24:11 UTC
That crime scene, with a great gaping hole where Sherlock ought to be...

Well done.

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szm June 9 2012, 07:07:33 UTC
Thank you very much

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yaycoffee June 8 2012, 06:23:04 UTC
Nice work. Your tone and character voice were spot on. I really liked this!

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szm June 9 2012, 07:08:08 UTC
Thank you for reading it :-)

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aeron_lanart June 8 2012, 13:03:26 UTC
I like.

Yay for Donovan - though I see John would probably still like to kick her at least and more than likely a lot worse.

Giggled over John's comment about his writing - and the capitalisation of Doctor.

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szm June 9 2012, 07:12:34 UTC
the capitalisation of Doctor

*headdesk* That's what the Who/Torchwood fandom does to you I guess :-P

I am glad you liked it. I think John is quite cross with a lot of people, not least himself.

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blade_girl June 9 2012, 13:22:15 UTC
Very nice! Subtle but perfect voices and characterizations. John's lack of forgiveness toward Donovan and her stubborn refusal to apologize ring quite true.

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szm June 9 2012, 16:21:22 UTC
Thank you for such a lovely comment.

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hab318princess July 9 2012, 20:47:02 UTC
I still want to strangle Kitty... Donovan can have at her!

great story

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