Fic - Not Loneliness or Even Love

[szm]

Written for the challenge on tw_lucky_7

I'm not totally happy with this but the deadline fast approaches so...

Title: Not Loneliness or Even Love
Author: szm
Sin: Lust
Character: Tosh
Word Count: 746
Rating: PG

Summary: Tosh looks back at what happened with Mary

Comments

[vipersweb]

Interesting reflective piece for Tosh. I like the take you took on this - why she was so seduced by Mary. Slightly different than the normal take.

You have a type. "taht" instead of "that" in the paragraph that starts "Mary was a liar and a killer"

[szm]

Thank you very much (fixed the typo, thanks for that too!)

[crowson75]

I liked this. I love the line about Mary's certainty - how much Tosh wished she were like that. I know that feeling. Confidence and sureness is very attractive, especially if the person who possesses those traits is interested in you.

I can also imagine Owen exactly what you have him saying in this. Very much his tone.

[szm]

Owen was trying to be nice! Sort of, in an Owen way.

Thanks for the comment.

[love_jackianto]

Oh, I'm so jealous, you write the best Tosh.

[szm]

Many thanks, my Tosh voice always gives me so much trouble i'm glad you liked it.