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Fic - A Perfect Place

Feb 19, 2009 18:38

Title: A Perfect Place
Author: szm
Characters: Jack/Ianto
Rating: G
Spoilers: End of series two, but you have to be looking hard.

Summary: The best kind of traps are ones you don't want to leave.

Betaed by vipersweb

A/N: Fluffy fluff, but not written for miss_zedem's fluff battle. However that's only because I managed to miss it till earlier today. Off to play now ( Read more... )

ianto jones, gwen cooper, torchwood, fiction, fandom, jack harkness

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tanarian February 19 2009, 18:54:21 UTC
Ooooh, that 'my fault'. *cough* But hey, that was something that happened to you at work! Wasn't my fault at all! (For once.)

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szm February 19 2009, 19:04:45 UTC
People reading this are now trying to work out how I got myself kidnapped by aliens at work... *g*

Your. Fault. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. *nods*

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tanarian February 19 2009, 20:03:10 UTC
Pfft! You work with kids - they qualify as aliens without even raising a sweat! And all I did was say that I loved the idea of that room!

And I should say that I loved this fic. I loved the way Ianto didn't want to leave because Jack was with him and the fact that Jack was having more trouble escaping because Ianto was with him. And the way they now communicate without needing words. That was a lovely observation. And the description of the room and the sensory experiences was just beautiful.

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szm February 19 2009, 20:16:52 UTC
Hee, aliens wouldn't really stand a chance would they?

Thank you. It would be harder for Jack this time. 'I must escape to save Ianto'. 'Oh he's here, never mind then' *cuddle*

I really want there to be a sense of all three of them being really close next season. And that the new peole have a job breaking into that.

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bardlover6 February 19 2009, 19:01:17 UTC
that was amazing.

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szm February 19 2009, 19:05:07 UTC
Thank you

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love_jackianto February 19 2009, 19:32:33 UTC
'I couldn’t think of anything I wanted to leave you for,' replied Jack in a low voice.'

*points to icon*

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szm February 19 2009, 20:17:28 UTC
yay! Dief aproves!

Thank you very much

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missthingsplace February 19 2009, 19:58:11 UTC
That was just fabulous ...

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szm February 19 2009, 20:18:09 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it

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fide_et_spe February 19 2009, 20:09:34 UTC
Oh that was wonderful. I love how you manage to write fluffy pieces, yet retain the character voices and keep it so close to canon, I didn't even slip into a diabetic coma.

I could really do with a week or so in that room...

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szm February 19 2009, 20:20:45 UTC
I maintain that cannon is fluffy. No really it is, if you look really, really carefully...

Thank you, it's always a worry went I write things like this that I'm just going to make people's teeth hurt.

I could really do with a week or so in that room...

With or without Jack and Ianto? ;-)

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fide_et_spe February 19 2009, 20:28:39 UTC
Well I think it would be lovely in there anyhow, but as it's a fantasy room, then yes they can share it as well. That would be very nice.

My teeth are OK, I think you do it very well. It is almost neutral as fluff goes. Canon definitely does have a fluffy edge, I agree.

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