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Ficlet - On the Way Home

Feb 05, 2009 00:14

Being Human - shockingly 100% Torchwood free fic.

Title: On the Way Home
Author: szm
Characters: George, Lauren
Rating: PG

Summary: George runs into Lauren the morning after...

Betaed by the lovely vipersweb who hasn't seen the show but betaed his anyway - because she loves me. *g*

( On the Way Home )

george, lauren, being human, fiction, fandom

Comments 12

vipersweb February 5 2009, 01:44:44 UTC

Of course I love you :)

Now, I want to actually hunt down this show and see it. Has to be better than Primeval.

szm February 5 2009, 15:42:26 UTC

It's a good show. I think I liked the pilot best, but the two episodes we've had so far have been good.

Better than Primeval - well I think so.

vipersweb February 5 2009, 16:15:44 UTC

Primeval has all the hallmarks of a good show: they have dinosaurs for gods' sakes. But the plot line is so convoluted and doesn't make sense.

amaresu February 5 2009, 04:45:01 UTC

This was lovely. I especially liked the comments on how George's perception of pain has changed.

szm February 5 2009, 15:43:28 UTC

Thank you very much.

tanarian February 5 2009, 09:13:25 UTC

Aha! Found it! Oooh, this is good - you really have got inside poor George's head. It's lovely. (well, in an angst-ridden, my life is shite sort of way.)

Now, go and stop Jack from pouting, you bad girl.

szm February 5 2009, 15:46:09 UTC

tanarian the fic hunter *g*

Thank you very much, poor George. He has a difficult life.

You can't stop Jack from pouting - he does it all the time! See in your icon, pouty Jack. My icon, pouty Jack...

tanarian February 5 2009, 18:01:47 UTC

I'll have you know that my Jack is NOT pouting! He is being Deeply Thoughtful, so there!

*giggle* Me Fearless Hunter. Me go catch Scary Fics. *lots more giggling*

tildathebuilder February 5 2009, 22:59:40 UTC

*grins* this is great. Nice to see George's perspective at the different times of the month

szm February 6 2009, 15:55:55 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it

aimsleydale February 11 2009, 02:47:55 UTC

Niiiice. This is very clever, well witten little character piece - I especially like the comments on 'family' towards the end, and the concept that Lauren is looking for a father figure (because that's not screwed up at all)

And the graphic descriptions of George's trasformations were well put without sounding gory :D

szm February 11 2009, 07:16:24 UTC

Aw poor Lauren *I'd pet her but I'm not getting that close* not screwed up in anyway - except compeletly.

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)