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szaleniec1000

Hogwarts Overexposed Chapter 14

Aug 25, 2019 23:17

Last time on Harry Potter and the Undulating Derrière, there was no sign of a plot until the very last scene. Because Hogwarts Exposed.

( Hogwarts Overexposed Chapter 14 )

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Comments 3

mancalledtrue August 26 2019, 22:56:04 UTC

Welcome back. Too bad this dreck is what you had to come back to.

szaleniec1000 August 30 2019, 08:59:01 UTC

Thanks. :) I'd say it's good to be back, but you know.

ext_3553624 August 31 2020, 17:23:59 UTC

Great spork.

And it´s gonna get even worse from here.

I can´t wait till you reach the point where Caitlin uses her Sue Powers to make two giant spiders explode after one of them almost ate her during one of the tasks of the games, and when they all arrive on Fantastic Island and forget how to use magic.