Reboot Fic: Interlude in Green - Draws Series VI [Pike/Kirk/McCoy, R]

[syredronning]

Title: Interlude in Green (Draws VI)
Author: Acidqueen
Series: Reboot aka ST:XI aka AOS - Draws Series
Codes: Pike/Kirk/McCoy
Rating: R for some vocabulary
Word count: 2200
Disclaimer: Paramount/Viacom owns Star Trek, I own my brain.

Author's Note: This is a direct sequel to Domino Effects and may not make much sense without it. They are

Comments

[weepingnaiad]

This was just so beautiful! All relationships are hard and prone to insecurities and jealousies and I imagine a threesome would need more and be more, but worth it. I love how you showed that each in his own way feels left out, but that they all understand and intend to keep working on making sure that everyone shares their mutual love.

Really lovely interlude. I loved getting a glimpse inside each of their heads and hearts!

*hugs*
WN

[syredronning]

Thank you so much for your feedback! Yeah, they really work on making it work, because beyond the insecurities and the distance, they love each other really too damn much :)

*waves*bounces*

[illariy]

Oh, I loved the different perspectives on their threesome and how they all share some anxiety over whether they're the third person in a waltz. I read the ending twice and am not sure I entirely get it... my head is still debating whether they resolved that anxiety adequately or not. ;-) Very interesting stuff. Thanks for sharing this!

P.S.: It makes me grin, seeing so many people comment with your lovely P/K/Mc icon.

[syredronning]

Many = 2 *G* afais.

Thanks for the feedback! The ending is realistic for me. The issue isn't really resolved, it's something that needs work once in a while but not necessarily talking about it, because that also means bringing it into focus - and that's not something one would do before it's not making serious problems on its own. My take on it and them.

[illariy]

The issue isn't really resolved, it's something that needs work once in a while but not necessarily talking about it, because that also means bringing it into focus - and that's not something one would do before it's not making serious problems on its own.

And you've just articulated my vague feelings re: the ending. Definitely realistic! I'd just expected something more... dramatic/conclusive, I guess, but that's life. Especially life with men. *g* Oooh, I'm so looking forward to what might happen next.

[adafrog]

Lovely, but sad. Well done.

[syredronning]

Thank you!

[sakura_no_miko]

I haven't read the series, but I liked this in and of itself. I personally find threesomes very alluring--it's got that Freudian sort of comfort to it, the union of a middle and two opposite ends. Id, ego, superego. That sort of thing. And I'm attracted to various bi- things. Biracial, bi-species, bisexual. so this idea of having both, instead of having to choose one or the other, is also pretty appealing.
Of course, as you've shown, it does end up opening up a potential for more problems. Shoot, tons of people can't make peace with themselves, let alone have a relationship with one person. Two? Forget about it. But, i like to think that if you're willing to work hard, communicate, and accept yourself and you other(s), things will work out, no matter how out of the ordinary the relationship is.

So...yay, threesome.

[syredronning]

re things will work out: Yes yes yes :))) If anyone should be able to, then this fabulous men who try to be more than mere mortals in their job every day and are not easily discouraged from a few smaller obstacles in their path.

Thanks a lot for your feedback, I'm happy that the story worked for you also without the surrounding universe.

[gattodoro]

Still catching up on this series - rationing my reading because its WAY too good to just be gobbled up, though damn its hard to resist. Anyway, I just love your description of the dynamics between the three and how there are necessarily experiences/feelings that are only shared between two of the three, but how they make it work because they are truly exceptional people and very much committed to each other in equal measure.

Thanks from an emotionally satisifed reader!

[syredronning]

Thank you so much for this feedback! So glad the series and their threesome relationship works for you :) *beams*