Reboot Fic: Interlude in Green - Draws Series VI [Pike/Kirk/McCoy, R]

Oct 12, 2009 23:17

Title: Interlude in Green (Draws VI)
Author: Acidqueen
Series: Reboot aka ST:XI aka AOS - Draws Series
Codes: Pike/Kirk/McCoy
Rating: R for some vocabulary
Word count: 2200
Disclaimer: Paramount/Viacom owns Star Trek, I own my brain.

Author's Note: This is a direct sequel to Domino Effects and may not make much sense without it. They are ( Read more... )

aos fic, pike/kirk/mccoy, draws series

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shagungu October 12 2009, 23:12:51 UTC
I loved the comparison of the different things that made each of them a bit jealous or insecure. It seemed very realistic to me (and I am a veteran of a group marriage myself). There are always differences between each of the couples within a triad.... things that only two share, and the third is left out of.

I've enjoyed the whole series, especially the recent chapters, and have reread each several times. I'm sure I'll come back to this one as well.

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syredronning October 13 2009, 21:22:22 UTC
Thanks a lot for your feedback! Happy you like the series :) *beams*

It seemed very realistic to me (and I am a veteran of a group marriage myself).

Yeah - unfortunately, some things never really get totally easy, as far as I see, and they're bound to have such moments of insecurities. But I'll give my damnest to keep them as a mostly happy threesome *G*

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roseandheather October 12 2009, 23:18:22 UTC
I think the three of them need to sit down and have a looooooong talk.

And then have hot mansex.

Oh, boys!!!

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syredronning October 13 2009, 21:23:16 UTC
Talk, tsk ;) This wouldn't be manly enough.

Let's see how it develops... :) Thanks for the feedback!

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blcwriter October 12 2009, 23:55:12 UTC
This is so perfect, and I'm so glad you did this because threesomes? Hard, hard shit. People feel lonely even in traditional love affairs-- this threesome stuff is way worse for all the negotiation that needs to be done.

Brava.

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syredronning October 13 2009, 21:26:22 UTC
Thanks a lot for the feedback! They all try to do their best - they'll manage :)))

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indigocat October 13 2009, 00:40:27 UTC
I love this series. Interesting how each of them is jealous of what the other two have.

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syredronning October 13 2009, 21:27:22 UTC
Thanks a lot for your feedback! Every couple within a threesome has its own dynamic and special aspects, so it's rather natural to have such moments (unfortunately).

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anruiukimi October 13 2009, 00:47:14 UTC
I'm actually not a big threesome fan most of the time, but you manage to make this work, and work well. :) This is probably the only threesome series I regularly read. :D Thanks a lot!

..the only funny part is reading it when I have my own fic open in the background for editing. 'tis a strange thing when I'm reading about Kirk and Pike being lovers, than going back to editing my dad!Pike and Kirk story. I think my brain boggled there for a moment. ^_~

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syredronning October 13 2009, 21:28:32 UTC
Heeheee. Wingfic! Yes! I really like your series.

Thanks for reading and liking mine although it's not your usual preference! I feel honored :)

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