FMA fic: Closing the Distance

[syolen]

Title: Closing The Distance
Series: Post-manga / Brotherhood
Word Count: 497.
Rating: PG
Characters: Winry, Ed, an OC
Summary: That kiss was quickly climbing up Mr Marklin's list of Most Heartfelt Reunions.
Warnings: None.
Note: Written for fma-fic-contest, for the prompt "Still needs something".

Comments

[crazybeagle]

D'AWWWW.
Very nice OC POV here, you didn't put anything more or less than such a POV in such a short fic would require. I like him- he's an old sap. :)
Also- thank goodness there's finally a train station kiss. I wanted to smack Ed in the final chapter of the manga where he couldn't even spit out an "I love you." >sigh< Men....

[syolen]

Hahaha, you're right, it's a small miracle that Ed managed to let Winry know he cares at all!
It's apparently a rule in shounen manga that there should be no kisses... whatever. That's what fanfic is for! :D

Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Your icon is also very sweet ^^

[syolen]

Thank you! I'm glad people seem to be liking Mr Marklin, I was worried he would come off as an old perv who likes to watch young couples kiss. XD

Thanks again! :D

[lynx212]

Awwww too cute!! Love the POV.

[syolen]

I actually witnessed a similar scene at the airport once. It was too sweet not to use!
Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you liked it. :D

[yuukihikari]

Awwwww! Happy warm fuzzies for everyone. Like others have said, nice PoV :D I like how it has distance and is non intrusive.

[syolen]

Frankly, I'm not sure I want to know what Ed and Winry were telling each other. So the distant point of view works. XD

Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you liked it. :)