Comments | syolen: FMA fic: Ashes 15/?

syolen

FMA fic: Ashes 15/?

Jun 13, 2010 23:37

Title: Ashtray (Lying Still)
Timeline: Post CoS
Rating: PG-13? 15? There are references to alcohol and sex, (one) use of the f-word and ANGST.
Character: Winry (hints of EdWin).
Summary: Sometimes Winry can't go to bed at night, but she knows exactly why: there's no one to kiss her goodnight.
Disclaimer: I AM NOT WORTHY (i.e. no, it's not mine).
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fma fic, ashes, fma, fic

Comments 12

evil_little_dog June 14 2010, 03:56:32 UTC

Poor, poor Winry.

I love this. It's so sad and perfect.

syolen June 14 2010, 23:00:33 UTC

Poor, poor Winry.
Winry agrees (she's earned the right to wallow in self-pity once in a while).

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

driftwoodwings June 14 2010, 04:09:16 UTC

Makes me sad for her. I really liked this. <3

syolen June 14 2010, 23:03:25 UTC

EVERYONE should be sad for FirstAnime!Winry. I'm so glad Chap 108 made it up to her. Poor girl.

I'm glad you liked it! :)

dreamer1789 June 14 2010, 07:06:06 UTC

Oh ouch! Great setting, nice symbolism. ^^

syolen June 14 2010, 23:04:51 UTC

Yep, she's hit rock-bottom, or close enough. Luckily Chapter 108 exists! :D

Thank you for your comment! :)

dreamer1789 June 15 2010, 07:33:14 UTC

*nod* Yup, usually I can't read a sad post-CoS fic like this without feeling angered on their behalf and getting a bit upset at that ending. But since the real end I've been doing this lil victory dance imh, going: 'eat that, stupid movie ending!' XD

clewilan June 14 2010, 11:06:13 UTC

Pour te citer, "like whoa".
Je pense qu'on est tous partis un peu en déprime avec le 108, et j'espère que ça t'a fait du bien de poster ceci !

syolen June 14 2010, 23:07:15 UTC

Je ne crois pas l'avoir fini à cause du chapitre 108, mais c'est sûr que ça défoule ! Les personnages de fiction servent de punching-ball aux auteurs, c'est bien connu ! XD

Merci pour le commentaire ! :)

Commentaires en désordre tecsomane June 17 2010, 23:48:54 UTC

("En mai, fais ce qu'il te plaît". Hahaha.
Juin ? Je n'ai toujours pas saisi le concept, non. Ha bon ? On est le 18 ? Soit.
Juillet sera (normalement) plus calme. Et je pourrais reprendre recommencer la lecture des FMA. Ou pas. **soupir** Sinon, je réussirais bien à compresser ça entre deux trucs à faire. **grognements de désapprobation de l'agenda**)

J'aime beaucoup ton texte, les images me viennent dans la tête très nettement, ça ne m'arrive pas souvent...