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ariadne83 December 1 2007, 09:03:49 UTC
Umm, no... I believe that sound is me making dolphin sounds of joy. More JD n Cam yay! While the other horrible teases on my flist are watching SGA 4x09 I'll be reading this *glee*

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Broken wings! ariadne83 December 1 2007, 09:49:36 UTC
Running commentary - Hoorah, Grace Slick/Led Zep. And ooh, I love them so much for taking the time to get to know each other and do things right (not easy). And, and "He's sending his lover straight into the snake's den, and JD might not ever be coming back." BUT he'll do it anyway. However long they have it'll NEVER be enough, they'll always want more but neither of them would ever hold the other back - it's just so breathtakingly beautiful and rare. But "I got through it. Because I had Sara waiting for me on the other side, and she was -- untouched. Separate." *sobs* And isn't that just the kicker? Cam has to choose between what he wants and what JD needs, and it's for the sake of his lover's mental health. Aargh! But, see, Cam's smart enough to know there's a third way - that for all intents and purposes they've stopped being separate, and he's brave enough to insist that they move forward together *sighs* "You gotta trust me to stand by your side ( ... )

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Re: Broken wings! synecdochic December 2 2007, 07:24:00 UTC
I think the conflict between Cam and JD in that first half was what totally killed me in this section, actually, despite all the other angst moments. Because the two of them had perfectly conflicting desires and needs, and they both knew that to give into the other's would be contradictory to their own -- and really, it's one of those things that could have gone so messy, would have gone so messy, except they're both smart enough to see where the other one's coming from and they love each other enough to try to put themselves in the other one's shoes, you know? And once you get through all the instinctive impulsive denials and contradictions, you can work to find another way ...

I love Momma so much in this chapter, man. She is nobody's fool. *g*

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

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Re: Broken wings! ariadne83 December 2 2007, 10:15:55 UTC
*grins* Cam n JD always make me thinky, but they also make me appreciate what I have. Oh, to be half as smart as they are

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lacey December 1 2007, 09:18:13 UTC
Absolutely worth waiting for.

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synecdochic December 2 2007, 07:24:17 UTC
Thank you! Let's hope it won't be this long until 11. *g*

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lacey December 2 2007, 07:29:46 UTC
I can get behind that!

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l_jade December 1 2007, 09:27:05 UTC
EEEEEE!! new chapter !! :) *read very fast*

Thank you for this, been waiting for this for a long time...

*going to re-read*

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synecdochic December 2 2007, 07:24:29 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the wait was worth it :)

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scifigirl December 1 2007, 10:02:50 UTC
I let out a squeal of joy when I saw this show up on my flist and it did not disappoint! I've already said this but I absolutely love the universe you've created here and I anxiously await the next part.

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synecdochic December 2 2007, 07:25:16 UTC
Thank you so much! I didn't expect to love this 'verse as much as I do, much less for everyone else to love this 'verse as much as y'all do, and I'm so glad I can get going with it again. :)

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introductory December 1 2007, 10:18:26 UTC
Oh, lordy. Heartbreaking and real and raw.

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synecdochic December 2 2007, 07:25:45 UTC
Thank you! I keep saying, I only hurt the ones I love ... which means that I love JD and Cam a whole hell of a lot. *g*

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