fic: eventually, we're easy to objectify

Jul 08, 2007 10:17

Title: eventually, we're easy to objectify
Author: azuredamsel
Ratings/Warnings: PG-13.
Word Count: 925
Summary: Later, he'll tell someone that she was, at that point, trying to decide whether or not she should have a heart.
Author’s Notes: For emogangsign, because a girl needs a long-lost brother sometimes. (I'm sorry in advance if you hate it.) As to the rest of you? ( Read more... )

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jeonggam July 8 2007, 15:47:34 UTC
Oh, wow. This is really, REALLY, astoundingly brilliant.

I love your style in this - the strikethroughs and noting down what they don't say - because so much in our lives revolves around the things we don't say.

It's just... it's beautiful and poignant and just... oh, my dear. It's lovely.

Thank you for writing such brilliance.

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synecdoche July 8 2007, 21:33:14 UTC
Thanks! I had the idea in the car on the way to a party, and came home and wrote and then went to bed, woke up, and wrote some more. It kind of wouldn't let me stop.

I'm really glad you enjoyed. ♥

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emogangsign July 8 2007, 16:19:24 UTC
wow.

wow.

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synecdoche July 8 2007, 21:35:20 UTC
I hope "wow" doesn't mean you hate it.

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tocz July 8 2007, 16:39:27 UTC
never stop writing.

your work is wonderful.

have you ever thought of collecting all your original fiction and getting it published? you might be able to (though your first love is obviously music, haha)

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synecdoche July 8 2007, 21:37:18 UTC
Thank you! ♥

I sort of just post my writing here, but who knows? Maybe I'll do something with it eventually. A girl's got to relieve stress somehow. :)

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zanra July 9 2007, 00:58:45 UTC
Where you smile against the raindrops in your eyes.

That's terrific. I could read that sentence over and over again and never get tired of it. Uhm. This whole thing is terrific. Much love ♥

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synecdoche July 9 2007, 13:21:35 UTC
Thanks! ♥
I'm really glad you liked that line -- it seemed like rain is really hard to write about without venturing into the land of cliche.

Also: Your icon is fantastic!

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synecdoche July 9 2007, 13:22:29 UTC
Thanks! ♥
I love you and your talent bunches and bunches of bunches. So dark and angsty and lovely. :)

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