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symbolism_egg

In Disarray

Oct 30, 2010 03:05

Summary: Five months is not an anniversary, and Link finds himself protective of Allen in more ways than necessary. Light Link/Allen/Link.
Written: November 2009
Notes: A fic I originally wrote for the kinkmeme a year ago. Now heavily revised and posted here. Fluff, not smut. No warnings.

( In Disarray )

characters: howard link, genre: slice-of-life, characters: allen walker, length: short, characters: exorcists, series: d. gray-man

Comments 16

sinistersundown October 30 2010, 16:46:47 UTC

I loved this when it was originally posted, and I love it just as much now. You capture them so perfectly. ♥

symbolism_egg October 31 2010, 01:21:21 UTC

Ohh, so you saw it then too.

Thank you. &hearts

furtherthannear October 31 2010, 05:35:25 UTC

*KEYSMASHES FOREVER* Okay, okay, I'm off on CLOUD HAPPY right now, so I can't coherently review this, but expect me to return to leave you a very long and detailed and most likely CAPSLOCK filled one tomorrow.

&hearts

(I'm so sorry for turning into a giggly wreck, but... you know how I am.)

symbolism_egg November 1 2010, 06:18:50 UTC

*JOY*

I shall look forward to it! And at any rate, thanks for this comment. :)

furtherthannear November 6 2010, 19:04:13 UTC

Aaaaand, I'm finally back after days and days and days. lmao, I am terrible with keeping dates, as you may have noticed.

On to the review!

First off all, I'm not sure how on earth I managed to miss this come up on the kink meme. I'm quite sure I haven't read it before, because this was so spot-on that I think I would have remembered it. But, ah, I don't. So go me.

What I really love here is that you manage to breathe life and emotion into Link (which is your specialty, of course~) without breaking the flow of the story. It reads like it comes from Link. And I am SO JEALOUS of that.

The way you wrote the Lavi-Allen interaction was great. Link trying to double his glare power to get the point across to Lavi made me laugh, because it's a fruitless effort to begin with. XD And I had a bit of a Link moment just imagining the grease stain down Allen's face from headbutting into his drumstick. EW, please clean your face right now, Allen.

This line: Photographic memory or no, did Lavi know how many stray pairs of socks ended up under ( ... )

That was an amazing comment. symbolism_egg November 7 2010, 10:15:05 UTC

OH WOW THANK YOU FOR THIS DETAILED COMMENT. Once again I am unworthy ( ... )

rinhail February 16 2011, 10:20:33 UTC

I'm really beginning to enjoy these two. Thanks again for the wonderful fic. :)

symbolism_egg February 17 2011, 20:52:43 UTC

Oh man, really? Awesome. Thanks for reading and commenting (again)!

rinhail February 18 2011, 14:53:15 UTC

I'm slowly getting back into D.Gray-man after abandoning it for months. I plan to go back and read the entire series whenever I finish the anime. :)

symbolism_egg February 20 2011, 23:29:26 UTC

Cool. Have fun rereading!

I haven't liked many of the recent chapters, though I'm still reading for the characters. I should reread the more recent volumes, myself--it's easy to forget the details of whatever the heck is going on here.

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