SPN Fanfic: Catch a Tiger

[sylvia_locust]

Title: Catch a Tiger
Rating: R?
Pairing: None
Word Count: ~3,000
Spoilers: Pre-series, so none? Takes place the summer after "A Very Supernatural Christmas."
Warnings: Creepy OPOV. Also attempted non-con, but not very graphic.
Disclaimer: Please don’t sue me.
Author's Note: Thanks for editing, Mom! No, I'm not telling you my LJ name.
Summary: The

Comments

[verucasalt123]

I am completely stunned, I have read this three times already before I could put together a comment, and it's still not even a decent one. Your outsider POV is fantastic here, the creepiness and desperation, and oh how I love it when Papa Winchester swoops in let someone know they messed with the wrong kids. Thank you for this!

[sylvia_locust]

Oh-I-am-so-relieved... I agonized before finally posting this story. Glad you liked the pov. I've written two spn stories and they've both been narrated by outsiders; maybe soon I'll have the courage to try a Winchester pov. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

[tifaching]

Wow. Billy's thoughts are completely terrifying and exactly how I imagine a creep like that would think. I'm shuddering with revulsion here and that takes a pretty compelling story to do.

Well done.

[sylvia_locust]

Is it bad that I'm happy you had a physiological reaction? Yay and sorry...

[jasmineisland]

Creepy. Love the ending!

[sylvia_locust]

Thanks for reading!

[medusafox]

Oh, wow. Just... wow. The ending was so brutal, but exactly what I can imagine John doing. This story gave me the shivers. Thank you.

[sylvia_locust]

Thanks for reading! I'm still wondering what canon-John would have done, but when I was writing I just couldn't see him letting the creep get away with it. At some point the lines between demon-hunting and vigilantism have to blur, right?

[medusafox]

I see John as being a lot harder and less black and white when it comes to humnas vs monsters. He's been to war and probably had to kill a very human enemy. I tend to think it would make him less hesitant to kill a human "monster", especially one who threatened his boys like that.

[sylvia_locust]

That's a very good point about John's military history! It must have informed his hunting, so if it turned out he was hunting a psychopath instead of a ghost he'd probably be able to pull the trigger. Especially since he was probably faced with the task of killing civilians who just came to the war from a different point of view.

[borgmama1of5]

Brutally believable POV. I appreciated Sam fighting back. What John did made me gasp.

[sylvia_locust]

Thanks for reading and commenting! I firmly believe wee Sammy would have tried to fight back...he was just overmatched.