When Satan Takes You Over

Mar 19, 2013 22:29

Thanks to everyone who read and commented on this story.  My first Supernatural Fic. I appreciate you all very much.
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Chapter 7

Sitting heavily in his chair, Dean leaned forward to run his hands wearily over his short hair. Just having a moment ( Read more... )

hurtsam, genre, angst

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space_monkey52 March 19 2013, 21:51:22 UTC
Absolutely loved this story. You did an awesome job getting emotions out of the reader with your writing. This goes on the list of fics that made me stare at my inbox waiting for updates. :P

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sylvia37 March 21 2013, 07:44:08 UTC
Thanks so much. I really wanted to explore Sam's side of things and get into his head a little more since the show really doesn't most of the time. I appreciate you taking the time to let me know that you liked it.

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ithuriel788 March 20 2013, 00:38:42 UTC
Well played.. And I always like stories where Dean gets on Sam's case for doing exactly what he (Dean) would have done.

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sylvia37 March 21 2013, 07:40:58 UTC
Thanks so much. Yeah, Dean is a complete hypocrite when it comes to Sam, isn't he? I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate you taking the time to comment.

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mdlaw March 20 2013, 02:14:22 UTC
Well, that sounds like an ending in need of a sequel to me. m :)

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sylvia37 March 21 2013, 07:37:45 UTC
A sequel may be forthcoming, but I've got something else in mind first.
Thanks so much for reading.

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cappy712 March 20 2013, 03:15:05 UTC
BRAVO!!!! Tears again man, tears again.

For your first story - you knocked it OUT OF THE PARK!!!! This was beautiful and I loved how you wrapped it up with the fact that Dean finally realized that Sam hated himself.

So much of the way the boys react has to do with worrying about each other instead of actually talking to each other and being honest.

I have to agree this sounds like it needs sequel!

Still wonder what would have happened if the angels had brought John back instead of Adam???? Now that would have been a very different twist in the show.

Thank you for taking the time to share this wonderful story with us.

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sylvia37 March 21 2013, 07:36:48 UTC
Thanks so much. You're so encouraging. I agree that the boys need to be more honest with each other, it's so frustrating sometimes, isn't it? A sequel may happen, but I've got something else planned before that.
Thanks again.

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cappy712 March 22 2013, 15:12:38 UTC
Looking forward to the next story you post - have fun writing and remember that it's for fun!!!!!!

Even with the angst, hurt, and feelings that come out!!!! Thank you again for taking the time to share your story and future stories.

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leighannwallace March 20 2013, 11:48:42 UTC
Love this story and fantastic way to end it. :) Freaked me out, totally, when Sam did the whole kill me thing, very, very good story.

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When Satan Takes You Over sylvia37 March 21 2013, 07:34:28 UTC
Thanks so much. I really appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment. And I'm glad you like the ending.

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