SHARPE
He didn’t want to talk about it. He didn’t want to dwell upon it. He didn’t even want to think about it, but his mind would not let it go. He hurled another pebble into the river. No, he was NOT jealous of finding Edrington in Arthur’s quarters. No, he was NOT guilty about having bedded Edrington. Dammit… Arthur had bloody told
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However, I noticed echoes in this of some of farothiel's stuff. If this was intentional, it would be nice to credit her as having inspired you.
The active Sharpe fandom on LJ is pretty small, and it's lovely that you're writing in it. If you need inspiration, take a look into the canon - or even into the history (which is fascinating on its own merits) and see what else you can come up with.
Don't stop writing, but explore the canon a little, and don't feel you have to limit yourself to just one OTP (I know I don't!).
I hope my criticism has been constructive. If anything I've said has upset you, please let me know; I'm just trying to help.
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There was? *worries* Hmm... I'll have to re-read her stuff. If there were similarities, it's subconscious. :(
I hope my criticism has been constructive. If anything I've said has upset you, please let me know; I'm just trying to help.
Yes, it has. No, it has not. Thank you. :) I really *do* appreciate it. I'm new at this stuff and am still struggling with it.
I still have to absorb / respond to LC - on a quick read (still at work here) she picked up on all the bits that I was struggling with.
Yes, I need to finish watching the series and reading the books (not to mention more research) but I also like having a record of my nasty writing. Weird, I know... but I learn that way. I tend to edit / re-edit instead of keeping versions - bad me.
P.S. Would you link me a list of FanFic commonly used Acronyms? I'm not understanding OC / OTT / OTP Thanks again.
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Far as I can recall... I was re-reading Sharpe's Tiger when I wrote this and I took from Canon that Sharpe was pointed to a stool and couldn't pick it up to re-position it and drew from that, the likelihood he would have difficultly getting up again. Farothiel's "Assistance" conjures a powerful image and I wouldn't deny that it was probably a subconscious amalgamation of the two scenes in my mind.
Good writing and powerful images tend to inspire. :) Definitely. I'll credit her for the inspiration. Thanks for pointing out the reference.
Back to work for me.
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