Word Soap: As The World Keeps Turning
Author: SYLnl
Title: #17 Making new connections
Rating: PG
Summary: Kim gets it. And so does Luke.
Big Thanks To:
ltklo, for nurturing my nouns
Disclaimers: see chapters #1 to #16
The day ended as it had begun. The blond head on his arm, Luke’s hand on his chest, his leg tangled with his, his even breathing against his
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“You were not!”
“Excuse me. Did you bother to greet me, when you saw me? Nope. You turned to Noah and started explaining - or should I say apologizing - to him why I was there.”
“Oh God,” Luke had whispered and after parking the car at their home, he hadn’t moved.
“So I switched to my traditional self-defense mechanism and pretended I didn’t care. Pretended that the picture of you and Noah on your nightstand didn’t made me nauseous. That the thought of you and Noah making love on that bed didn’t make my skin crawl. So I wasn’t joking. I was hurting.”
This may be my favorite part of anything you've written. It really drives home how hopeful Reid was in that moment only to feel rejected. I'll never watch that scene the same way again.
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I never bought the 'well, ... first love is kind of funny..."-line.
Really love the ATWT-sequel of yours!
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The line about needing a nudge or a bulldozer was classic! Great job.
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