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06 This Whole People Caring about People Business

Nov 11, 2011 10:55

Author: SYLnl
Title: #6 This Whole People Caring about People Business
Rating: G - PG
Warning: Longer than usual, but it had to remain one story
Summary: Reid meets the Snyder clan
Disclaimers: Just checked my mail. No million dollar deal inside and no early Christmas gifts like all the rights to ATWT. Tomorrow could be a different story. Think not.
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lure, word soap, fan fiction, rating: pg, romance, sylnl, atwt, drama, luke/reid

Comments 22

petuniagirl November 11 2011, 19:13:54 UTC

I love a good list, and #9 about made me melt. Lily's comment was just awful. I was so glad to see Emma stick up for Reid and for the family.

sylnl November 11 2011, 19:28:42 UTC

Me too! I missed the 'old' Emma on ATWT, and this fan fiction gave me the power to get her back! Yeah!

aljc100 November 11 2011, 20:40:12 UTC

Jeez. When You start making Noah look like a decent human being, it's time for a rethink ...

Loved it!

sylnl November 11 2011, 22:36:14 UTC

Believe me...I was in shock! Totally prepared for (and looking forward to) some Noah bashing...but it just didn't came out that way. So weird! LOL

nancygrew November 12 2011, 03:58:33 UTC

Such a powerful fic! You did a nice job of conveying the solidity of LUke and Reid's relationship and did a great job of explainging Lily's reluctance to let go of the idea of "Noah and Luke".

It's sweet that Reid appreciates the idea of family even if it's something that he's nver longed for before.

I like Tough Emma telling Lily off.

sylnl November 12 2011, 10:10:57 UTC

Thanks! I don't share your opinion about 'not longing for a family' though. In my POV it's all part of his defense mechanism. I'm anxious to find out how it will play out myself:-) but I wouldn't be surprised if his experience of 'family' is completely different than the Snyder dynamics (excluding Lily) that night.

Nothing to do with right or wrong, by te way. It's just my POV and this whole fan fic adventure offers me the opportunity to explore that view.

jennytjones November 12 2011, 07:29:14 UTC

Great story. I am glad that Lilly was put in her place by Emma.
Thanks for posting

sylnl November 12 2011, 10:11:47 UTC

Thank you for the feedback! Glad you liked it!

kccalgal November 13 2011, 05:47:48 UTC

This was really nice. I love the mental listing going on especially #10. Lily can put her foot in her mouth all she wants. The family is behind Luke, and it seems Noah is too as he has found his civility.

sylnl November 13 2011, 10:55:39 UTC

Thanks. Yeah, looks like Noah did some growing up himself:-) All we have to do now is hoping Lily will too, some day:-)