04 “You Don’t Have a Say in This”

Nov 09, 2011 18:55

Author: SYLnl
Title:  #4 “You Don’t Have a Say in This”
Rating: G
Warnings: mild Lily bashing
Summary: Distractions, distractions, distractions
Disclaimers: Just to be absolutely sure, I did check again, but nope…still don’t own ATWT or their characters.
Big Thanks To:  ltklo, for checking my grammar, so I feel more secure about this ‘writing in English ( Read more... )

lure, word soap, fan fiction, romance, sylnl, atwt, rating: g, drama, luke/reid

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ltklo November 10 2011, 12:25:52 UTC
One of my fav things is Reid interacting with kids, especially when they see his inner gentleness and appreciate his straightforwardness. It was all great - Luke taking the "Reid approach" with Lily, Reid's "angry" explanation, and of course, "brothers".

The minute he was back on the ground, Ethan took Reid’s hand and pulled him. “Wanna see my bed?”
Reid couldn’t help but looking at Luke, while raising an eyebrow. The humour in Luke’s eyes emphasized he understood this message. This should have been your line…a long time ago…
Very clever! :)

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sylnl November 10 2011, 12:29:08 UTC
Loved your feedback, thanks! And you're so right... children react to the inner stuff and we both know Reid's inner stuff is pretty good:-))

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