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Jan 05, 2010 18:12

Title: What She Wants to Hear
Author: Ixatexstars
Paring: Sylar/Elle
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: "We are accidents  waiting, waiting to happen" from the song "There, There" by Radiohead

Here in this trembling building I tell her )

#18 - accident, by - ixatexstars, rating - pg13

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superkappa January 6 2010, 13:08:00 UTC
I really liked this. You created wonderful imagery.

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quirkysmuse January 6 2010, 15:41:32 UTC
I love the tone and pacing of this drabble. Excellent work.

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di_elle January 7 2010, 00:09:31 UTC
This drabble is very poetic, wonderful done!
love the last line.

[also WELCOME TO THE COMMUNITY! I gave you an author tag :)]

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ixatexstars January 7 2010, 01:01:32 UTC
Thanks all of you! Im new to LJ so forgive me for not being very computer savvy:)

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di_elle January 7 2010, 09:59:23 UTC
you're welcome :)

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disalae January 7 2010, 03:32:32 UTC
Welcome welcome! It's so awesome to see new writers and voices in the fandom. Thanks for joining us :)

So, past that, this was a lovely and poetic drabble. Each word seemed very carefully selected. Hope to see more from you!

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