Breaking Point: Protege

[sylargrrrl]

Title: Breaking Point:Protege
Rating: Pg-13- R for later chapters
Word Count: 2,582
Parings for the series: Mohinder/Sylar, Mohinder/Peter, hints of Sylar/Luke later on but one-sided
Characters in this chapter: Sylar, Nathan Petrelli, Luke Campbell
Warnings: Some violence, some subtext. So you know the usual.
Summary: AU.It's been approximately two years

Comments

[iluvbsbkevin]

First of all... Feel better!

Secondly, I like the WHOOSH flashback in there... and I'm looking forward to more! :'D Great starting point! MAKE MY HIATUS WHOLE... XD

[levitatethis]

How exciting! I find myself anxiously anticipating your next chapter.

What a dire sounding future, but a fascinating one at that. I like the idea of you playing around with these relationships (Sylar as a Petrelli, the remembrance of Mohinder, working with Luke -- and what an interesting power he has).

Great job describing the take down. Very tense but clear.

[takhallus]

Yay! You rule, I can't wait to see where this is going!

[maxinegray]

Ugh your mental image of SWAT sylar is just.. smex worthy.

I love it so much!! The whole thing!

But please please hurry up and write more for me... but dont you dare tease me anymore. You'll drive me insane! haha

[eternal_moonie]

wow, this is an awesome start!!! Going to read the sequel!