All the President's Daughter's Men

[cameroncrazed]

Comments

[trinaweena]

this was perfect, sexy and funny, great job!

[cameroncrazed]

Yay! I usually try to mix sex with humor, so I'm glad that it works in this one.

[kittenrescue]

Wow, I thought my computer monitor was gonna burst into flames. *damn*
I'm really happy I've discovered "Heroes" fanfic - as I was kinda bored with X-Men fics.

Speaking of which - I beta for authors in the X-Men fandom, so I tend to notice things (it's an occupational hazzard) and found this:

>>She realizes how close he is, and wraps his hand around her balls and squeezes gently.<<

I doubt that's supposed to be HIS hand and HER balls. *g*

[cameroncrazed]

Whoops, thanks for catching that! Mea culpa.

[force_oblique]

Hahaha!!
THat was funny and sexy at the same time!
Really well written and I loved the wit in it!!

[cameroncrazed]

Thank you! I used to think that writing was just the worst, most awful thing to do and that I was no good at it - thanks for saying that it's really well written - I really do appreciate it. :)

[doctor_who_rulz]

I love your writing almost as much as holycitygirl. You get a gold star from me and Marvin xD.
Oooh. Heroes night tonight!
-Tells self to actually stay up-

[cameroncrazed]

I love little gold stars, so thank you! :)

[neur0vanity]

*happy sigh* I want to have your babies. This is so hot and funny, and I just plain love it to pieces! *saves*

[cameroncrazed]

Glad you enjoyed it :) I wasn't expecting to get any more reviews on this one, so this was a very pleasant surprise for me. Not exactly sure how we'd work out the baby thing, but thanks for the offer ;)