Sylaire Ficathon - Saligia

Apr 13, 2008 21:44

Three things they would like: Claire turning bad, smut, a somewhat happy, if ambiguous, ending
Three things they don’t want: Sylar going good, PWP, Slash or Petrellicest

A/N: SALIGIA is the mnemonic to remember the seven deadly sins: Superbia, Avaritia, Luxuria, Invidia, Gula, Ira, Acedia. Descriptions of the sins (and virtues) come from Wikipedia. I ( Read more... )

!one-shot, fic, #rating: nc17, @cameroncrazed, !au

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raitheemohugger April 14 2008, 14:48:52 UTC
Yay! This is wonderful. Thanks so much for taking the time to write it. I really, really enjoyed it.

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cameroncrazed April 14 2008, 19:53:44 UTC
So glad you liked it :)

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cindergirlgrimm April 15 2008, 05:29:03 UTC
Wow- that was amazing.

Very well written and GREAT idea!

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cameroncrazed April 15 2008, 19:14:04 UTC
Thank you! I was worried about the concept, so I'm glad to hear that you liked the idea :)

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cellshader April 15 2008, 16:51:00 UTC
This is so great!! wow. you did such a magnificent job at making the syclaire relationship believable, and the ending....guh. that was too great.

When Sylar takes his seat next to her, casually draping an arm across her shoulders, Claire’s not sure who screams the loudest
That imagery is WIN. So canon. XD

oors slam in the distance, and someone - probably Nathan - starts cursing fluently in Italian
That's so brilliant. Probably one of my favorite lines in fanfiction. XD

great work. <3

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cameroncrazed April 15 2008, 19:15:13 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :) I'm glad that you think that's it's believable and in character - I struggled with that, so yay! :)

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karanina April 16 2008, 09:15:37 UTC
You may have had trouble turning Claire evil, but you remember the old adage about how all it takes for evil to prosper is for one good man (or woman in this case) to take no action? That's Claire here for me.

You've painted a wonderful picture about her slide into the dark side, even while letting her retain some hiccups of goodness.

Very well illustrated point.

Also, lol at Nathan and Sylar working together, and I loved that Claire and Peter went around rescuing people from natural disasters WHILE the cameras were on them!!!

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cameroncrazed April 16 2008, 11:57:50 UTC
I find Nathan and Sylar very similar (being pushed to be "special" by their mothers; the willingness to do what needs to be done in order to be special - Sylar and the killings, and I feel that Nathan was willing to let NY blow up until the last minute; there's a few other examples from the show), so it seems natural to me that they might work together at times.

I enjoyed playing with the concept, and it probably shows. I was brain-storming on "what does it mean to be bad?" and "why would someone be bad?" and this popped up. I'm so glad that you liked it, and thought about that adage - that was one of the inspirations :)

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cameroncrazed April 29 2008, 02:06:05 UTC
Thanks for the comments, and for meming this :)

I know what you mean about Adam, lol. When I get some free time, I've got a fic that revolves around Adam - you might like that, might not. It's a Sylar/Claire fic, but Adam is definitely the main character and the narrator.

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