The Corruption of Peter Petrelli - 5/? - Petlar

[sylar]

Character: Sylar, Peter, and Noah
Genre: Slash
Author: thewatchmaker
Fandom: Heroes
Word count: 1500
Rating: R
Prompt: Week 3 -11. Adapt or perish, now as ever, is nature's inexorable imperative. - H. G. Wells for infinite_muses
Notes: Post series Petlar.

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four

Comments

[flying_monkees]

Damn that was good! I'm glad they got to talk to Noah and are working things out. I actually wanted to huggle poor Sylar.

Great job hun!

[sylar]

Thanks hon. I'm glad I got them to that point in case I can't get another chapter in during NANO. I'll probably be able to though. *fingers crossed*

[flying_monkees]

*fingers crossed* You have a few days, I'm sure you can. LOL

[game_byrd]

I literally squeaked out loud when I got to the end of this!

Beautiful! And I loved the characterization of all three of them, and the dynamics of their interaction. I liked the appearing/disappearing Noah-gun. That is so true. He has hammer-space. I also liked that Noah trusts Sylar to back him up, or at least enough to ask him to back him up ... and that Sylar was willing. As well as that lovely 'can I jump out the window in time' thought! Ha!

The back and forth on the key was very good and said a lot about where they are with each other. These guys are really into each other deep (though how could they not be after the Wall?) Thanks so much for writing. I eagerly await more (if there is to be more).

[sylar]

I"m glad you liked it. I needed to get to this point in case I can't write another chapter during NANOWRIMO. I didn't want to leave you guys hanging without having Peter's answer.

[game_byrd]

Hey, that's thoughtful! Thanks! Good luck on NANOWRIMO. I've got too much stuff banging around in my personal life to commit to that.

[sylar]

I try to be nice. LOL I took the last 2 years off, but I've done it 4 times before. My book that's being published this year's first draft was done in NANO.

[lornrocks]

Ooooh, what a cliff hanger!

[sylar]

It could have been worse, right? I might not have had Peter say 'yes'.

[lornrocks]

True, true...but now I'm wondering why he's saying yes.

[sylar]

He has his reasons.

[dancingdragon3]

Woah. I mean woah wee. I am squealing over here. What the hell did Noah say to Peter?!

That scene with the three of them was so full of emotion and realism. I was smiling every time Peter did something nice to let Sylar know he still cared, like when they held hands. That was so moving. I am getting more and more emotionally involved with this story with every chapter. I want things to work out for Sylar so badly. The care with which he treats Peter is getting under my skin. Great job!!

LOL to the Highlander comment.

[sylar]

Thank you so much. You guys all make me feel so good about my fic. <3

Highlander was my first fandom. I RP'd the first time online in it.

[empath_peter]

*small smile* Told you

[sylar]

*kisses you hard* Thank you for plot bunnying with me.

[empath_peter]

*shakes head* I didnt have to. You let him make the decision he was destined to. Thats one reason I love your writing. Its truth. Every story has one.

[sylar]

But you still helped me figure out how to get Peter there.