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sylar

Abandon all Hope - Sylar/Peter, Nathan

Feb 08, 2010 16:30

Character: Sylar/Peter, Nathan's ghost
Fandom: Heroes
Word count: 695
Rating: R for language and dirty thoughts
Notes: Missing scene from 'the Wall'. SPOILERS FOR THE WALL.
Verse: the wall - that I'm writing with futureboyscout
Prompt: Alright. It's you and I. No way out. Get your shit together. Okay? Okay. Let's go. for scifi_muses

( Here be dragons )

char - peter, verse - the wall, what - fic, what - petlar, comm - scifi muses

Comments 22

brandinsbabe February 9 2010, 00:43:52 UTC

oh my GOD!!!!! This is freaking fantastic!! I haven't seen anything like this out there yet and I'm loving it to pieces. What a great way to show how Sylar is feeling. I was sitting here reading with wide eyes the entire time. Loved this SO MUCH!

going in my favs!

sylar February 9 2010, 00:44:51 UTC

Thank you, hon. I'm grinning ear to ear.

psychedelicammo February 9 2010, 02:13:21 UTC

Well snap. I love this verse, I love this story. I'm sure Sylar's guilt manifests in all sorts of gruesome ways and that seeing Nathan's ghost while Peter's just in the other room (and naked) would be very rattling for him. And that Peter, though not Sylar's biggest fan, isn't going to let him suffer through the nightmare alone.

Also, partners wearing each other's clothes is one of my kinks. So damp!Peter running around in Sylar's sweats may have short circuited my brain.

sylar February 9 2010, 04:08:02 UTC

LOL I love catching other people's kinks. This story has been haunting me for 2 days, I'm glad I finally got it out. My Peter futureboyscout may be writing a companion piece with his own Nathan haunting.

kaasknot February 9 2010, 04:59:40 UTC

"Fear is the mind killer, Sylar." WAAAH you totally just quoted the Bene Gesserit! Of course Sylar would read Dune. It's all about backstabbing and manipulation, the things he hates most.

"But my voice cracks, so only a whisper gets out." gloriously conveys his fear. Which also reminds me, I love the way you've written in first person, it makes it much more immediate for the reader.

The scene starts out so sweetly, and ends so touchingly, and the middle is all creepifying awesomeness. =)

sylar February 9 2010, 05:03:08 UTC

Of course he's read Dune. He is a geek. LOL

I'm so glad you liked it. It was a rough piece to work on.

Thanks for reading it.

casiedearest February 9 2010, 19:18:41 UTC

im not sure how i feel about this. i mean, i LOVE it, great writing, you never fail to impress me, but now i'm kinda sad :( lol.

but peter wearing sylars pants, and sylar just being all 'whatev' about it = epic huge YES!

sylar February 9 2010, 20:35:09 UTC

Thanks.

This one took a lot of me writing it. Sylar's nightmares are so vivid.

He loves Peter so much.

casiedearest February 9 2010, 23:50:31 UTC

I can tell that you put a lot of thought and effort into it. Your hard work shows. Which is good, because I really do think that Sylar's thoughts and dreams WOULD be that vivid and detailed, which makes your RP more believable. And yes, I think that Sylar really does love Peter a lot. Canonly speaking even, not just in the slashy kind of way lol.

sylar February 9 2010, 23:52:19 UTC

I didn't know you read the RP too. :) That's so cool.

Oh yes you could see it in Sylar's eyes how much he loves Peter on the show.

anonymiss731 February 11 2010, 05:07:07 UTC

Holy Nathan's Ghost...that was kind of creepy and yet I went Aww at the end like it was fluff. 0_o You do weird things to me. Also the beginning was like poetry. I was stuck by how beautiful it sounded. *claps hands* Excellent work here....as usual. (Side note: Loving the mood theme)

sylar February 11 2010, 05:17:01 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

I'm about to change to a season 4 mood theme. Hope you like that one too.