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The Coming Storm

Feb 22, 2009 21:41

Title: The Coming Storm
Author: cameroncrazed
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3445
Spoilers: none
Note: Thanks so much to ladyanne525 for betaing - I really appreciate it!
Disclaimer: “Heroes”, it’s concepts and characters do not belong to me.

Written for challenge #10: lightning at sylaire_chall.

( It's going to be another July scorcher, folks, with no end... )

challenge #10

Comments 24

elliesmeow February 24 2009, 03:10:50 UTC

Yes! He finally stayed. Alright! I liked the story being partly told from the perspective of their daughter. It's nice Claire has a place now, where she feels safe and accepted. I'm really happy for her that he's come back and is willing to try to be with her on a daily basis.

Thanks for posting. It was enthralling.:)

-Ellie

cameroncrazed February 24 2009, 12:09:56 UTC

Thanks so much for commenting :) Glad you like :)

dianelyn February 24 2009, 04:39:30 UTC

Absolutely fantastic! Of course it would take decades for Sylar to get his crap together enough to stay.;) Love it.

cameroncrazed February 24 2009, 12:09:15 UTC

So glad you like! :) Yeah, he's a bit slow on the uptake, but at least he finally figure it out and stayed :)

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cameroncrazed February 24 2009, 12:08:45 UTC

:D Thanks for your help on it :)

kathrynthegr8 February 24 2009, 15:47:49 UTC

This is a really interesting take on that whole living forever thing! Fabulous. You knocked this one out of the park!

:)

cameroncrazed February 25 2009, 00:02:59 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

karanina March 2 2009, 08:49:43 UTC

Oh wow! Just... WOW! This is such an amazing story, and such a wonderful perspective! And just... WOWOWOWOWOWOWOOW!!!!

I love it so much! Just the way that Claire deals with Sylar's absence, and then reapparance at the end, and just WOW

cameroncrazed March 2 2009, 13:36:06 UTC

Thanks, and I'm so glad you like :)