Comments | swshawnee: 4: Cowardly Beings (2/2)

swshawnee

4: Cowardly Beings (2/2)

Feb 02, 2015 01:03

Comments 14

starkun March 4 2015, 06:02:18 UTC

NO NO NO NO THAT CAN'T BE HOW IT ENDS OH MY GOD I'VE CRIED I'VE SCREAMED I'VE GONE THROUGH EVERY EMOTION AND I'M SO MAD I'M SO HURT I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS

(this was really so good through your writing made me feel every emotion and it's just so beautiful ;; )

swshawnee May 10 2015, 21:55:24 UTC

!!!!!! thank you! i mean i'm sorry it hurt and all that but such is life i guess ;; your comment made me really happy though so thank you~ maybe someday i'll learn how to write fluff and make it up to you.

starkun May 13 2015, 01:06:34 UTC

Ahh you're so sweet ;;;;

no no no it's okay I'm actually a sucker for angst ><

(nc17angstismyguiltypleasure)

milielitre March 4 2015, 15:15:01 UTC

I really want to reset myself right now. How could you T-T ?

swshawnee May 10 2015, 21:56:18 UTC

D: sorry! t-thanks for reading? ;;

bblackteardrops March 6 2015, 13:28:50 UTC

My heart is in pieces I was not expecting this I want to crumble and die omg no noNOOO wonshik

swshawnee May 10 2015, 21:59:22 UTC

/offfers band-aid/ please don't die ;; who knows, maybe it worked out, ehm...
thanks for reading anywho~ and just please do not die ;

ext_2641123 March 7 2015, 16:36:01 UTC

whyYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

I have tears wowwowowowow

But waht happens to Ravaaa omg
so many questions
SO much HURT
So much I wanna slash his neck and play tennis with his head

wowowoaivhkgsva
I LOVED THIS
but seriously I am wondering on Ravi and his future. asygfasdv

swshawnee May 10 2015, 22:03:52 UTC

because you were wondering, you made me start wondering too, and now i kind of want to write a sequel ;; bleh! i'm sorry for the hurt and a little worried about the tennis?? idk maybe you should just look for a regular ball uh i think he needs his head
thank you!!

oppositelies April 19 2015, 19:45:38 UTC

Oh my god. This is seriously so good. Like the emotions throughout this fic were so insanely strong and powerful. You wrote them so well. I was not expecting that ending, but I love it. I love that Hongbin doesn't change or learn. I mean, it hurts. This fic hurts! I hate the idea of Wonsik getting swept under the rug after all of that. Because it's not like Wonsik was that strong either, but he cared for Hongbin intensely. The ending was so bittersweet. I loved it because you just wrote it so amazingly well and it worked. It flowed and made sense. You make me want to know more. Like what happens next? Does Wonsik give up? Does he become the new 'Hongbin'??? Hongbin really was too fucked up.

I'm sorry I keep repeating myself, but it's rare I find a fic that really and I mean REALLY gets me. I randomly stumbled on this one. I don't normally read Rabin fics, but this was length so I thought I'd give it a shot. And boy am I glad I did. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this!

swshawnee May 10 2015, 22:08:36 UTC

oh god thank you! this was almost a little hard to take in ;; but I agree, I'm also still thinking and wondering about their future... if they have one. especially from wonshik's point of view... it's kind of an on-going conversation with myself in my head about that at the moment, but I do want to write some kind of sequel. hopefully it'll happen at some point.
either way thank you so much, your comment means so much to me because I really poured myself into this thing, so knowing that you liked it is ;;; just amazing.