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swshawnee

The Promise

Feb 24, 2011 14:43

Title: The Promise
Pairing: Sunny/Tiffany/Taeyeon love triangle
Genre: Angst/Romance/Drama (Oneshot)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Sunny makes a promise to her best friend, a promise that's nothing but a road to badness. Written in Sunny's POV.

A/N: So this is my second real-life based fic. I randomly got the idea to write it down a couple of nights ago ( Read more... )

pairing: yulsic, genre: au, genre: confession, length: oneshot, pairing: sunny/taeyeon/tiffany, x: jessica, rating: pg-13, x: taeyeon, pairing: sunyeon, genre: angst, genre: romance, 2011, pairing: 2ny, x: tiffany, pairing: taeny, x: sunny, fandom: snsd

Comments 10

soshigasmic February 24 2011, 14:25:56 UTC

Read it cause I thought..that maybe just maybe. Sunny would get the better end...I guess not. Not now, not tomorrow, never.

I still loved the plot btw. ;)

swshawnee February 24 2011, 16:40:35 UTC

Haha, I'm sorry! And thanks ^^

chikaon08 February 24 2011, 18:52:06 UTC

Aaw this was a really great read! I know a lot of people aren't fond of 2nd POV, but I think it always adds something more when written well.

I'm a TaeNy shipper, but you know I kinda wished it did end up being SunYeon because I don't feel for players. But players do have to settle down eventually. It just sucks that Taeyeon helped hurt Sunny too after giving she gave her trust. Right now I'm sorta wondering who she is more angry at: Taeyeon or Tiffany. I know you wrote that she blames herself more than anyone, but it was just something I was thinking about.

Anyway very well written and I really enjoyed reading it :)

swshawnee February 26 2011, 12:27:41 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm actually not a big fan of 2nd POV either to be honest, but it was really liberating to write x)

Totally understand you about the players... and I think that most people would... or *should* be mad at Taeyeon's character, because they were aware of Tiffany's role as... completely untrustable. XD

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

cagallisakura February 25 2011, 01:28:56 UTC

Awwww Sunny got hurt by Taeny :(
So was Taeyeon actually crushing on Sunny? If she was, why is she with Tiffany now....?
Aish which do you think is less painful: absolutely one-sided love triangle or what we have now with a sad Sunny and happy Taeny who completely destroyed Sunny? :/
Thanks for writing this~

swshawnee February 26 2011, 12:30:40 UTC

Yeah, she was crushing on Sunny, but had had feelings for Tiffany in the past... and well. Love, you know 8)
I dunno, one-sided love is horrible, but... I guess in this situation it's one-sided love x2, so I guess that'd be a bit... well I dunno, maybe it's hard to compare pain that way O:
Oh, thank you for commenting and reading^^

timhyun February 25 2011, 04:45:32 UTC

Wow, wasn't expecting that.

I kind of wish you had indicators though of when time passed by, because there were parts where I was confused about what was happening.

I definitely wasn't expecting that ending. When she started texting Taeyeon, I was thinking "Good, she'll end up with Taeng and Tiffany can go do her thing somewhere else."

But man...that's so sad. I have to say though, I wish jessica couldve showed up at the end again just to give Sunny someone to lean on.

Jessica's warning is exactly like this one saying, that the more you discourage someone to do something, the more likely they will do it.

Another great story from you, good job :)

hablarloco February 27 2011, 16:00:35 UTC

Yay, a love triangle and a Tae2Ny one at that.

You look at Tiffany and your heart beats faster, Tiffany is looking at Taeyeon, and Taeyeon has her eyes fixed upon you.

I liked this sentence a lot. It made me feel like I was standing right there watching the drama between them play out. And I kinda wished Tiffany was the one who ended up forever alone instead. Poor Sunny, all sad and angry at the end (TT_TT)

Good job, it was a nicely written fic(^^)