Week 14, Title: Ramshackle

[swirlsofblue]

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We climbed up the mountain together,
We skipped the trellis, we fought the weather,
We put together these ramshackle pieces,
Held with Sellotape and old wire,

And the world was waiting for us,
And the winds ready to-
Knock us down,
And the seas ready to drown us,

But Oh, oh look at us now.

(This has been a sacrifice entry).

Comments

[bleodswean]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! This is fantastic and you should not leave us, J!!!!

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, so glad you found it fantastic :). And yeah, I felt it was the right time to go.

[karmasoup]

Way to go out on your own terms, leaving us in awe and applause! I bow to you. <3

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you so much, that's a lovely compliment :).

[adoptedwriter]

How can this be? This is so good!

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you liked it :).

[halfshellvenus]

Oh, no-- I'm so sorry you're leaving! You've written some of your best entries yet this season (the Icarus one is still on my mind).

This entry was fascinating all on its own, and worthy as a real entry. ♥

[swirlsofblue]

Yeah, I felt it was the right time to go.

Thank you so much, that's such a lovely compliment and I'm so glad you found it fascinating :).

[alexanderscttb]

Hell of a way to go out--

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you :)