Week 5, Title: I know a place where no one's lost

[swirlsofblue]

“To grand new alliances; and the joining of our kingdoms!”

Everyone cheers, though some of them still strained. It’s a good alliance, one that will lead both kingdoms to prosper, but there are better ones.
The king of the East sea lands wanted her hand and would’ve brought great wealth and power to them, but the man also had a reputation as a

Comments

[static_abyss]

Love this whole dynamic. I like how your main character changes, as opposed to her initial love interest. That kind of pairing is like music to my soul. Excellent story. Just, well done overall.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, so glad you like the dynamic :).

[bleodswean]

So so good!!! I could read chapters and chapters of this doomed love.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, that's so lovely to hear! :)

[sweeny_todd]

Jeepers! That was great. my favourite line: he girl who was determined to only marry for love died twenty battle fields ago.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, so glad you liked that line! I really like that one too. :)

[nikkiii_brown]

Drew me right in and kept me there. I'd love to know what happens next! (;

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, so glad it drew you in :)

[tonithegreat]

Ooooh nice. I wonder about the strategy and the other parties, but mostly I wonder what he was thinking and whether it could have worked. I like her a lot for being a hardened realist, too.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you liked the hardened realist of her :). I don't know if he was entirely thinking, beyond wanting them to be together again and wanting her safe.