Week 8, Title: She went quietly, she didn't make a sound

Feb 10, 2017 21:07

Sierra watches their silent gestures- a secret language borne of this place. And she watches as those who do speak are beaten and broken.

She watches as some plan, with half aborted motions and determined facial expressions. And watches as those who escape are dragged back and shot.

She watches people dying of disease, of starvation, of cold. ( Read more... )

original fiction, lj idol

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dreamsofspike February 14 2017, 16:15:40 UTC
Oh this is heartbreaking, so very devastating with your descriptions and the absolute hopelessness of it all... except then in the end, a faint little glimmer of hope, hard-won...

Beautifully done, love *hugs*

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swirlsofblue February 14 2017, 17:07:11 UTC
Thank you, so glad you found it heartbreaking and beautiful :)

*Hugs back*

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mamas_minion February 14 2017, 18:48:36 UTC
Amazing, this gripped my heart and made it ache, very descriptive and a wonderful story. I hope the people who see the report do something to make a change.

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swirlsofblue February 14 2017, 18:58:00 UTC
Thank you, so glad it affected you :).

We'll have to wait and see ;).

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baxaphobia February 15 2017, 16:32:18 UTC
I love this! I hope her efforts helped those still alive.

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swirlsofblue February 15 2017, 18:11:19 UTC
Thank you, so glad you liked it :).

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alycewilson February 15 2017, 22:18:14 UTC
Haunting!

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swirlsofblue February 16 2017, 17:59:30 UTC
Thank you :)

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murielle February 16 2017, 17:28:05 UTC
Brilliant!

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swirlsofblue February 16 2017, 17:59:41 UTC
Thank you :)

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