This looks really interesting! I like the way you right--straightforward and open.
I think Erik as the Bourne character fits perfectly, and I like your Charles, though we get to know Erik quite a lot more in this than Charles. I like the way he's willing to help, though.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Do you mind if I add you as a friend so I can see when you post it?
Holy crap, yes please!swiftmintSeptember 13 2011, 19:12:10 UTC
Please very much do friend me. Totally had a double take moment there when I saw your name on the comment. I just got done reading through Brief Lives and was about to leave a gushing squishy review (that sounds far more gross when put that way). Point is, thank you, I'm ecstatic you like it so far and expect a proper comment from me as soon as my boss stops looking over my shoulder (Work, shmerk) <3
Re: Holy crap, yes please!swiftmintSeptember 13 2011, 21:00:03 UTC
*dies at that gif* Happy to hear that, all of that. I am also definitely glad to have my job, I just wish my boss would be less nosy about what I'm looking at on my laptop on my break. :3 (There have been some close calls, let me tell you.) Have a good day and good luck with the job hunting!
Interesting beginning! Would love to see how this pans out. I like the idea of staidly Professor Xavier suddenly being roped into a deadly assassin-filled adventure.
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I think Erik as the Bourne character fits perfectly, and I like your Charles, though we get to know Erik quite a lot more in this than Charles. I like the way he's willing to help, though.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Do you mind if I add you as a friend so I can see when you post it?
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