Wow! That was an incredible piece of fiction. Loving your version of how Spike got his strength. It was so hot and so sexy, and yet bittersweet. Knowing thigs are changing for the better, right before they change forever.
ETA Alcohol bad. Very bad. I reminded myself of that last night.
The sensuality in this fic was irresistible, the way Spike was so conscious of his body and how he was feeling, the way he physically described Angelus, the picture we got of him through Spike's thoughts was quite something.
And the whole biting/feeding was erotically powerful but this one line,
He was defenseless in this passion.
You could write entire paragraphs to describe Spike in the throes of passion and it would never fully describe him, not so perfectly as that one line. It was so Spike it made me shiver.
And Angelus, well I could tell you but it wouldn't make much sense other than guh's and gah's and drooling all over the keyboard, damn that boy is hot!
I think Spike summed him perfectly when talked about the leather trousers, his descriptions were so Angelus!
Wonderfully done!
Things were going to be different now for him, very different.
*sobs* Very different, someone should warn Angelus to stay away from gypsys...
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ETA Alcohol bad. Very bad. I reminded myself of that last night.
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*does the happy dance*
That's exactly something I was trying to get across. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! And I'm glad that it worked for you.
::hugs::
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And the whole biting/feeding was erotically powerful but this one line,
He was defenseless in this passion.
You could write entire paragraphs to describe Spike in the throes of passion and it would never fully describe him, not so perfectly as that one line. It was so Spike it made me shiver.
And Angelus, well I could tell you but it wouldn't make much sense other than guh's and gah's and drooling all over the keyboard, damn that boy is hot!
I think Spike summed him perfectly when talked about the leather trousers, his descriptions were so Angelus!
Wonderfully done!
Things were going to be different now for him, very different.
*sobs* Very different, someone should warn Angelus to stay away from gypsys...
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Thank you!
And if there is anything there worth reading, it's because you pointed me in the correct direction.
*g*
Angelus/Leather Pants
Spike/Naked
Yep. I'm good.
::hugs you tightly::
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I appreciate it so very, very much.
::hugs you::
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