This is so sensual and dreamlike and sumptuous. So feverish and beautifully trippy:
Walking through alleys, the heels of his shoes grinding gravel and broken glass, discarded dreams.
The humidity rose to about 150% as I read this -- all that flora and salt and sour dripping for each word.
The forest silent as a dream around them, the Gulf sloshing up slow and steady on the dirty sand beach a half-mile away like a heartbeat that couldn’t be stilled.
So decadent!
They would be able to find each other in a city of millions. In a forest at midnight.
Yes, they would. And they will, right? Say it. say they will!
And each time, he told himself it would be different. And with the rise of the moon, the setting of the sun - the direct line and the burn of back lit pomegranate in the sky, it never was. And it always was.
Oooh, i like that. Something about those lines in particular...
Daaaaaaaaaaaamn, man. I *luff*. Luff. So much. You *rock*.
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This is so sensual and dreamlike and sumptuous. So feverish and beautifully trippy:
Walking through alleys, the heels of his shoes grinding gravel and broken glass, discarded dreams.
The humidity rose to about 150% as I read this -- all that flora and salt and sour dripping for each word.
The forest silent as a dream around them, the Gulf sloshing up slow and steady on the dirty sand beach a half-mile away like a heartbeat that couldn’t be stilled.
So decadent!
They would be able to find each other in a city of millions. In a forest at midnight.
Yes, they would. And they will, right? Say it. say they will!
Love this, hard.
etc.
:D
xoxoxox
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You make it all sound so much *more* and I luff your feedback. And your thoughts and your mind.
xoxoxoxox
*adores you wildly*
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*flails*
And I've been reading porn over at Insane Journal all day, yet you still make me go Guh! with this, darlin'. Absolutely gorgeous!
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Whooooooooot!
*adores you*
Thank you, babe!
xoxoxo
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So glad you liked it.
*hugs*
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Oooh, i like that. Something about those lines in particular...
Daaaaaaaaaaaamn, man. I *luff*. Luff. So much. You *rock*.
*twirls you*
*goes to re-read*
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Yayayayay!! Thank you for the prompts. Made me think, damnit!
;)
*smooch*
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Thinky pr0n.
*la*
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*stare*
god, now I wanna see skinwalkers even more than before lol
this was absolutely awesome
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Thank you!! And yes! You must see it, even just for teh!behr!wolf sex.
xoxoxo
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