If I Know What Love Is

Nov 15, 2005 14:00

My contribution to chrisleeoctaves' I Will Remember You Fic Marathon.

If I Know What Love Is
By Snow
Angel/Buffy, Angel/Spike
PG
Not Mine
Beta by a2zmom

If I know what love is,
it is because of you.
~ Herman Hesse ~

If I Know What Love Is )

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redbrickrose November 15 2005, 20:51:14 UTC
Gorgeous, and so very true to Angel, because he can't let go of her, no matter how hard much he might think it's for the best. I love the contrast between his memories of Buffy and Spike; it rang very true. Angel draws such an absolute distinction between his life with a soul and his life without it, but there are always ways in which he conflates the two, just a little.

Loved it. Poignant and beautifully written.

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sweptawaybayou November 15 2005, 22:02:43 UTC
Thank you so very much! I appreciate your reading and leaving me such generous feedback.

You have made my day.

*hugs you tight*

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thenyxie November 15 2005, 20:52:46 UTC
Oh, and love, love, LOVED this:

her seemingly perfect life and the casual courage of false invincibility that came with her age.

That is just a beautiful way to describe being a teenager, and a way I've never heard it quite put before. I'm envious, and in love with it.

And of course, this wasn't too shabby, either ;)

When he witnessed her, in that one, endless, shining minute take the weight of the world on her shoulders. When she didn’t sag or shrug or weep with the injustice of it all, with the absolute loss of her youth and her innocence and Angel fell in love with the spirit inside the woman before he knew her name. He fell in love for the first time in his life.

Yes.

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a2zmom November 15 2005, 21:07:41 UTC
I told you when I first read it that it was a beautiful, insightful piece and that still stands. Love.

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sweptawaybayou November 15 2005, 22:05:14 UTC
Thank you, thank you. For the world's bestest, fastest beta job. You totally rock.

And thank you for helping me make this a better story.

**hugs you so tight you squeak*

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lynnenne November 15 2005, 22:33:54 UTC
Very nice. Love the memories that were coated yellow with age and the last line. *pets your Angel*

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sweptawaybayou November 16 2005, 12:57:59 UTC
Thank you!

**hugshugs**

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tabaqui November 15 2005, 23:43:28 UTC
Ahhhhhhh, sweet, bay-bee.
Writing the hurty stuff like that.
*smoooch*

I like - liked him thinking he kissed Spike first...
Yeah.
:)

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sweptawaybayou November 16 2005, 12:58:52 UTC
*hugs you tight*

Thank you soooo much.

**loves you relentlessly**

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tabaqui November 16 2005, 16:28:13 UTC
*smooches you all up and down*

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