ats_endofdays

[sweptawaybayou]

Illusions
By Snow
For ats_endofdays
Episode 1x10 Parting Gifts
Angel/Wesley
NC/17
Set directly after 1x10
Beta by neverneverfic
Thank you.

Comments

[elucidate_this]

ohhh FABULOUS!

loved it before, but with the changes it's just perfect. *happy sigh*

seriously i want to read your slash all the time. i want that to be my job. read snow's fic. do you think i could get payed for that? probably they'd have to start paying you to write it first.

[sweptawaybayou]

I'm glad that you liked the changes and thank you so much for taking the time to help me with this, a good beta makes all the difference, all the time. And your suggestions were so helpful!

Can I hit you up again sometime?

And thanks for the feedback. Always.

**licks**

[elucidate_this]

totally hit me up. anytime. i LOVE to beta.

*takes a moment to bask in the licking*

*licks back*

[sweptawaybayou]

totally hit me up. anytime. i LOVE to beta.

Oh Dude. You're so in trouble now . . . *g*

::shags you senseless::

And did you see the pics of Dave that Jules sent me???

*faints*
*dies*
*twitches*

[trishabooms]

You never fail to capture all of my imagination with your writing, it's so good.
I agree completely about the voices, Wes is spot on, and I think this is close to the best Angel voice you've written, and I don't think Angel's voice is easy to capture.
This was really good, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Thank you.

[sweptawaybayou]

Thank you! Thank you!

For both reading and commenting.

::smooches::

[ponders_life]

Whoa, intense, man. No, really! That was a relatively short piece, but it's amazingly effective. You really got into Wes's head and established a dark, melancholy mood. And then boom! Sex apparently out of nowhere, but plausible at the same time. And then, at the end, character revelation from Angel.

Niiiiice.

[sweptawaybayou]

Thank you! So much. I'm very pleased that you, especially, enjoyed reading this story. I appreciate your comments and feedback always.

::hugs::

[flurblewig]

Wow, that was just gorgeous! Spot-on voices, and very very hot.

“Angel. Angelus. We’re one and the same..."

That speech was just fantastic. Gave me real chills :-)

Awesome fic!

Tiny typo spotted: holding his eminent orgasm at bay Should be imminent, I think?

[sweptawaybayou]

Thank you so much! For both the generous feedback and the error spotting. Oops!

That was one of those things I changed post beta. **headdesk**

Thanks again, though. For both reading and commenting.

::hugs::

[flurblewig]

You're welcome! Although I have to say, the way you describe Angel's deep throating skills, Wes probably *did* have an eminent orgasm :-)

[sweptawaybayou]

*dies laughing*

**hides the fact that i had to look up both eminent and imminent**

But, hey. It was a hellofablowjob. Hee!

Thanks!

[makd]

breathtaking insight. I especially liked the last lines:

I didn’t do that for you. I did it for me. I’m not the good guy, Wes. I never was. I never will be.”

heartbreaking, breathtaking..

I haven't any more words.....

[sweptawaybayou]

Thank you so much for such generous and thoughtful feedback!

I appreciate your taking the time to let me know you enjoyed this story.

::hugs::