vagabond: moving from place to place without a fixed home; wandering

[sweetvlady]

I forgot to post this poem i wrote on February 20th.
So here it is.

VAGABONDSWe spend our time like vagabonds

Comments

[iseeyoushaking]

wow... umm honestly get it published. i'm not kidding go talk to the creative writing teacher at your school and ask for addresses for anthologies//magazines accepting work for possible publication. if you don't have creative writing go talk to the head of the english department.

i like the escape and desperation, yet helpless feel to it. and how everything is so beautiful, yet it all fits together in a cycle. and it rhymes without sounding forced which is nearly impossible to do. i'm really impressed.

[sweetvlady]

thanks DARLING <3333
i doubt any teachers would know anything about that kind of stuff, though.

[icantkickmyself]

Of all the poems you've written that I have read, this one is my favorite. It's in the style that Conor Oberst would write. It's amazing.

[sweetvlady]

that is such a huge compliment :D
thanks sadie <333

[fresh_lungs]

Oh wow. If i could write like that i would send out a million copies to various magazines to see how many will publish it. and I guarantee you somone will publish it. because there are very few people in the world that can write like that. And you are definately a prdigy. I have read zillions of poems and yet can never write my own past the first line. You have talent. Do something with it.

thats right, i'm forcing you to get it published somewhere.
<3

[sweetvlady]

haha, you're very cute :)
thanks for what you said but i'm no prodigy. really.
but you're awesome <33

[spedcialchild]

that's beautiful,
you're beautiful.

so much for writer's block, eh?

<333 i send out love.

-mary.

[sweetvlady]

<33333

oh, it is such a relief to get out of that stupid period.
although, maybe this was just a thing in the middle. i don't know.