Gone

Jan 28, 2012 18:26


Title:  Gone
Author:  BunniesOnTheMoon
Length: Oneshot
Genre: Angst?
Pairing: YunJae
Summary:  When Yunho loses his voice, he starts thinking of... possibilities.

And then he realized how much better it sounded coming out of Jaejoong’s angelic lips than when it came from his, and he felt so ashamed. )

fic: gone

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zemasrunner January 29 2012, 19:01:07 UTC
so sad!!!!!
it's so frustrating!
why did it have to end like this?
please do write a sequel!!!!

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sweetsymphonyyj January 29 2012, 22:29:13 UTC
I don't think Yun'll fall in love with Jae even if I wrote a sequel DX *hides*

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purplezest January 29 2012, 22:22:19 UTC
OMG i am actually crying, such an amazing one shot *sobs into hands* omg too much emotion for my wee brain to handle

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sweetsymphonyyj January 29 2012, 22:28:09 UTC
Gahh you liked it XD *squishes you* hehe, I love making Yun suffer, but I think I went a bit to far to kick him out of DBSK DX.

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purplezest January 29 2012, 22:34:32 UTC
OF I LOVED IT!

hmmmmm i actually don't think you did....it would be the natural course if he couldn't talk after a certain amount of time....and normally ppl fix it instantly so it ends on a 'like it never happened' note lol.

I love how you ended it :D not saying you can't do a sequel were jae shags his mute brains out though *whistles* keke

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sweetsymphonyyj January 29 2012, 22:52:04 UTC
Hahah rough smex with even rougher moans would be the right type of remedy to make Yun's defiant vocal boxes sings again XD //smacked

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jademiwolf January 30 2012, 20:37:09 UTC
merrr :(
i love this fic for all its sadness and desperation.
i really felt the happiness/calmness/acceptance and elation that came with the prospect of not having to be an idol. I've always wondered how they live and if they've doubted themselves or wanted to stop the idol life and how they could continue and strive for so much.
and i felt as if you just worded this feeling perfectly but from yunho's point of view which is even more perfect while really saddening.

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