The Maybe Somewhat True Story: Epilogue + Notes

[sweetiejelly]

Part: 14/14
Previous parts: engagement announcement | picking the date | finding a wedding planner | picking the wedding party | official engagement announcement | guest list and invitations | choosing colors | choosing locations | choosing the cake | bridesmaid dresses | guest list revisited | Noah's film showcase | the (official) wedding

Comments

[carolinablu85]

You are ridiculous and perfect and I love you.

(I'm talking to the story, not you.)

(I love you too, though. And you are so freakishly talented at writing LOVE that it makes me want to hit you. In a loving way.)

(And I love Luke and Noah, and you make it very very easy to continue loving them. I like how their histories were the same and different in this. And your attention to the little details makes it so real and wonderful. I love this section up here ^ and how very weddingy it. You're awesome, Ronnie. This is fantastic. Stop it.)

EDIT: When he leaned over for a kiss, it was a slow sort of thing too, like the start of a water color, a dot and then a spread of colors. This? Shut up. I hate you.

[sweetiejelly]

Gah, you're too sweet. Thank you so much, Ella! I'm so glad the love comes through all that other stuff here. And so glad the AU-ness of it was okay. I started off following the Merlin fic plot but wanted to diverge a bit to infuse more of the Nukeness into things. Glad that worked out okay.

I was hoping that sentence made sense! Glad to hear it did to you. :)

♥!

[mizumichan]

I'm afraid I'm not eloquent enough to accurately express my love for this entry other than by this:
sdlkhfedskfhwskrghskh KHFJGERFDKJHSKJHSK <3333333333333333333333333333333333333
And that times, I dunno, a billion at least. I don't want to break your page, that would ruin the lovely ending.

This was just so lovely and wonderful and perfect in every way! I didn't even realize it was AU at first because I jumped right in, and it was such a lovely surprise to see them falling in love all over again. Everyone was spot on and you just put this ridiculous smile on my face the whole time.
Ugh I love you and this fic and thank you so very much for sharing your words and that wonderful way you use them.

[sweetiejelly]

You are way too sweet. Thank you! So glad you liked this. And oh, cool. I'm glad it worked for a while for you even without knowing it was AU! That's neat. :D

And yay yay yay for the smiles! Thank you for putting one on my face too. <333

[the_beccaroo]

ka;sdfjaf there were so many points in this where I was just clawing my face with delight - Ronnie, this is just the sweetest and most perfect thing and I absolutely adored it. Just like, so many perfect details were included, and just wonderful moments - oh, Holden's little speech to his boys! let me just die! - this whole thing was fabulous. Everything felt new and familiar all at once, just like all the very best stories. <333333 ugh, so much love. :D

[sweetiejelly]

Aw, thank you so much, Becca! So happy you liked this. And yes, Holden daddy is my favorite! :D So glad his part came through okay here. And yay! I'm glad the boys felt familiar to you even though they fell together a different way. <333!

[babslovesmusic]

This put me in such a blissful mood. I loved everything about this fic. It was so much fun and full of so much love. Holden's speech to his sons brought tears to my eyes. I flashed back to the show so much while reading it. You did an exquisite job of showing Luke and Noah's love for each other. Just so beautiful.

It was so much fun how you included so many characters from the show. My favorite was your treatment of Ameera. You had me on the floor laughing with this line. "Ameera, on the other side of Noah, was seated too close to the sharp little snack forks for Luke’s comfort. "

HUGE HUGS FOR YOU!!

[sweetiejelly]

Aw, hugs back! Thank you so much, Babs. I'm glad about the blissful mood. So happy this did that. :D It was a lot of fun to write, so I'm glad to hear it was fun to read as well.

LOL! Yeah, I was sort of going with the Merlin fic's depiction a bit there. But then I can totally see Ameera going that way. She did have a lot of scenes where she was all mysterious-almost-dangerous-like. Glad you liked her here. :D

<333

[seajellybaby]

This is the craziest but yet most perfect of fics! And I know it's true for sure! This is exactly how the wedding happened! Yes it is!

Thanks so much! I enjoyed this so much!

[sweetiejelly]

Aw, thank you, Gill. Glad this felt like it might have been true in some universe out there. :D Thank you so much for reading and the comments on all the parts! <333