Perfectly Out of Order

Nov 28, 2011 10:24

Title: Perfectly Out of Order
Author: forlove/sweetiejelly
Rating: NC-17
Pairing, Characters: Luke/Noah, Reg (briefly Luke/Reg)
Word Count: 2,681
Disclaimer: Characters belong to ATWT, P&G, CBS, etc.
Summary: Their bodies fit, but do they?
Notes: Written for the luke_noah anon meme to the prompt: "The boys are in a friend-with-benefits type of relationship ( Read more... )

nuke, luke, au, nc-17, noah, fanfic

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dreamer_98 December 17 2011, 03:21:04 UTC
I meant to comment on this earlier, as this was one of my prompts. This was so wonderful. I love how jealous Noah got, and how he finally gave in and told Luke how he felt.

I love this description especially:
Luke comes down slowly, like in a dream. Sometimes this is what it feels like to him, like it’s cotton candy - a little too sweet, a little too fragile to be real. And then could it disappear? Just like that? Just like it was never there?

Thanks for writing it!

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sweetiejelly December 18 2011, 07:12:37 UTC
Oh, awesome! I was looking for a 2nd prompt to write and this was the one that called to me. So thank you for prompting it, Jen! <3 Glad it was okay.

And thank you so much. That was one of those sentences I feel like I didn't write but the keyboard tapped out. (Those are the best; I wish all of them were like that! :p) Hee. Anyway, thank you! <3

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valenti1965 January 30 2012, 20:53:48 UTC
Loved this one! x

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sweetiejelly February 1 2012, 17:34:35 UTC
Thank you! It was fun dabbling in this AU. :)

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