Where the Lines begin to Blur - 2

Jul 10, 2008 18:19

Title: Where the Lines begin to Blur
Part: 2/?
Chapter Links: Links to all the Chapters
Author: tia_maria_616 & sweetchild85
Pairing: Ville/Bam
Rating: PG - NC-17, depending on the chapter

Summary: A troublemaker and a teacher with a past meet outside of lessons for some private tutoring, but it soon becomes apparent that their subject is changing from maths to chemistry ( Read more... )

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poisongirlfawn July 10 2008, 18:18:07 UTC
Oh, poop. You just hadddd to end it there! That was HELLA GOOD. The amount of detail, the way you get into the characters heads is amazing. Such talent. I'm quite jealous. You better have more soon, cuz this trains getting crazy.

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sweetchild85 July 10 2008, 19:37:38 UTC
awww... thank you =)

well you know... having them living in your head is sometimes annoying, but hey... if there is something good coming out of it for you all to read... then we deal with having the two love-birds in our heads.

more will come soon, don't worry.

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slasher48 July 10 2008, 20:05:56 UTC
I want that private place written.

I'm panting for it.

Both of you are just SO good!

Every detail is perfection and I'm seriously into this story already.

More. I demand it. NOW.

All my love! ^^

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sweetchild85 July 10 2008, 20:10:47 UTC
Well... you know... everything, well most if it... is already written, but we don't want to rush it with the posting, do we? *smirks evilly*

It's great to hear that you're so into it already and all that. Damn good feeling to hear that =)

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slasher48 July 10 2008, 21:31:40 UTC
*pouts* Yes, we do. We really, really do.

*sigh* Okay, you know me too well not to know I love the suspense, no matter how unfun it may be be.

*smiles* Always glad to make you feel good, Ina, love. Especially when you give me such an amazing treat as this story! ^^

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sweetchild85 July 11 2008, 08:38:23 UTC
then we'll keep the treats coming and we both will be happy, right? ;)

sounds like a good plan for me.

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sweetchild85 July 11 2008, 06:57:32 UTC
we love addicts, shows us that we're not alone ;)

your next fix will come soon, don't worry.

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noita0 July 10 2008, 21:58:45 UTC
Wonderful story! Verv well written (especially thedetails of actions and inner thoughts). I also adore how you create the tension, all the while so playful.
Also a plus: long chapters, gives me the possibility to get lost in the story. It feels like I'am sitting at the bar and obsrving these to guys.

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sweetchild85 July 11 2008, 06:58:39 UTC
Thanks for the lovely comment.

Getting lost in the story is exactly what I want to be when I am reading and it's so good to hear that you get lost in what we did, so yay ;)

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anonymous July 10 2008, 22:22:28 UTC
Awesome! Can't wait for more!

Great work! n.n

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sweetchild85 July 11 2008, 06:58:51 UTC
thanks =)
more will come.

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