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Defect

Oct 23, 2011 13:37

Title: Defect
Pairing: Yunho x Jaejoong
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I'll just buy my own Jaejoong robot 8)
Genre: AU, angst, drama, romance, scifi, tragedy
Length: Oneshot
Warnings: Unbeta-ed, mentions of sex, cruelty.

( Jaejoong is a robot declared broken beyond repair. When his old owner gets rid of him, Yunho finds him. )

dbsk, genre: angst, rating: r, genre: tragedy, genre: scifi, yunjae, genre: romance, oneshot, genre: drama, genre: au

Comments 92

abcdefghiluvyou October 23 2011, 12:55:02 UTC

D: oh girl. this was really cruel, poor jae.

i like what you are writing- stay productive
like this okay? :)))

sweetballads October 28 2011, 20:22:57 UTC

Thank you! :DD I'm really happy you're liking what you're reading :DD

And I know it was cruel. D: Sometimes, I just really feel like writing something cruel lol. XD;

pawshingo October 23 2011, 13:15:10 UTC

Poor Jae, just when he started to think things were getting better for him.....sad.

sweetballads October 28 2011, 20:23:26 UTC

I know, poor JaeJae. D:

ellen611 October 23 2011, 13:28:56 UTC

poor Jae!! So sad to be killed by the one he loves.
Thanks.

sweetballads October 28 2011, 20:23:53 UTC

Thank you for reading! :)

crimson_miharu October 23 2011, 14:07:02 UTC

Very cruel but honestly I couldn't see yunho falling for jae since jae was not a real being

sweetballads October 28 2011, 20:27:33 UTC

I know. D: Even though Jaejoong wanted nothing else than be a real being, nothing could change the fact that he wasn't. And on top of that, he had developed his own will as well.

It's just cruel that his hopes were crushed so easily.

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sweetballads October 28 2011, 20:28:04 UTC

I know. D: Sorry for getting your hopes up!