Fragile 2/4

Sep 21, 2011 19:29

Title: Fragile
Pairing: Changmin x Yoochun
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: When I close my eyes, they are mine.
Genre: AU, angst, drama, romance
Length: Chaptered
Warnings: Unbeta-ed, rape, incest, underage sex, twisted parentship.

Summary: ‘I love you’ soon becomes a meaningless phrase for Yoochun. His mother takes him more and more often to those ( Read more... )

completed: fragile, dbsk, genre: angst, genre: romance, yoomin, genre: drama, genre: au, rating: nc-17

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n3uromanc3r September 21 2011, 22:25:25 UTC
I really hoped that Yoochun's stepfather is a nice person, but that nightmare confused me so much. I wanted to believe it didn't happen only in the boy's dream, but the way Dongmin acted when they watched the movie, how he barely protested when Yoochun initiated and even arranged those weekly bonding hours when Yoochun's mother had the dance lessons disappointed me so much!

I don't know ... Changmin's parts in their argument make me suspect that Changmin has also bad memories about the house...

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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sweetballads September 22 2011, 14:20:56 UTC
Dongmin's character is quite twisted as well. Guess that's why he fits perfectly with Yoochun's mother lol. XD;; No really, this story will only continue to get more twisted in the next part so brace yourself! I think you'll be surprised when I have time to write down the next chapters. XD I'm letting you in the dark about Changmin for now but lololol TWISTED FIC IS GOING TO BE TWISTED!! 8D

(Oh, I'm so mean for revealing this little right?)

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toni_luv September 21 2011, 22:36:55 UTC
Just when you thought the step dad isn't so bad turns into a disappointment. Quick Chun jump at Changmins leg and say "TAKE ME WITH YOU!"

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sweetballads September 22 2011, 14:22:01 UTC
LOL XD

Brace yourself, this fic is going to become even more twisted. And oh, how I wish he could do that. <3 But Changmin is quite moody and not really accepting at the moment roflmao.

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abcdefghiluvyou September 21 2011, 22:37:09 UTC
i'm so tired but when i saw
an update on this i forced
my eyes to stay open haha.

but...awww no updates for a while?
you tease!!! just when changmin
entered the picture ;))

I really like this- maybe because it
is so similar to all the things i write
all the time? just the kind of stuff i like
to read: weird, taboo, dramatic and morally wrong
-best mix ever imo haha :)

good luck for your exam :))

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sweetballads September 22 2011, 14:29:03 UTC
Ohmygod you don't know how much I love your fics. <33333

LOL CREEPY STALKER MODE ON 8D (No, but really, I'm you're secret admirer and I feel so honored right now lol! ...and 'secret' because I screwed up when I registered on LJ and misclicked my date of birth and I can't change it ._. Or well, I can change it but LJ still doesn't allow me to read 18+ fics... so now I'm screwed when I want to read them xD;;)

LOL sorry but I like to tease my readers! XD

And thanks! :D ...I'll really need it. XD I'm going to isolate myself from society I think and when I come back, I'm a genius 8DD ornot, procrastinating. <3

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abcdefghiluvyou October 3 2011, 00:25:05 UTC
i just re-read this since you updated and realized just now that i left this unanswered (sorrrry ;; )

secret stalker huuuh? :DDDD that's okay- i seem to have a lot of them for some reason haha-
i really like this fic, just read your update and was so heartbroken. i really like to suffer when reading a fic so... good job!!!! update soon okay?

/goes to sleep due to braincrash

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sweetballads October 3 2011, 20:49:06 UTC
Hahaha 's okay XD

Yeahhh, guess I'm not so secret anymore now. XD But I really like your fics! <3 ...Okay who am I kidding, I love them. :DD
So I'm really glad you're liking my fic. :D I guess we both really like to suffer while reading fics lol I've always got the same feeling. <3 I'll try to update soon :D

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crimson_miharu September 22 2011, 00:26:50 UTC
Im all caught up and OMG! This story is so intense! My heart goes out to Chun and I honestly can't stand his mother because she whored her son out dont give a shit about the step father because He is using Chun for sex...maybe even with the mother's consent and then there is Min...I think he knows about his father's perversion but then again who knows even real life Min strikes me as uber moody....

Good Luck with your exam!

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sweetballads September 22 2011, 14:33:13 UTC
I'm glad you're liking this fic! :D
I know, everything is so twisted. ...but it's only going to get more twisted... so I guess you'll have to prepare yourself mentally XD And LOL, ikr, sometimes, when I look at Changmin, he does gives off this moody vibe LOL. but he's still irresistable and sexy and hot and snarky as fuck <33333

And thanks! I'll need it lol. (As a matter of fact, I'm procrastinating right now...)

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acornmama September 22 2011, 01:23:26 UTC
This is an amazing story. You write it in such heartbreaking clarity and though the subject matter is ugly you make it no less ugly but Yoochun is beautiful.
Good luck on your exams and I will definitely be waiting for the rest of the chapters of this.

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sweetballads September 22 2011, 14:37:58 UTC
Oh, I love your comment. <333

I wanted to write this from the perspective of a child, someone who's still easily influenced by the words of others and doesn't know that it's not normal to have sex at such a young age and under those circumstances. I guess that's what makes it even more heartbreaking; Yoochun doesn't like the feeling of sex but he's still young and believes his mother no matter what.. and he still wants to show his love for the people around him. But we do know that it's sick what Yoochun has to go through.

And thank you! :D

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