Finding Prince Charming Chapter 2

[sweetballads]

Title: Finding Prince Charming
Pairing: Yoochun x Junsu, Changmin x Junsu
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: If they were mine, I would be doing other things right now.
Genre: AU, romance, crack
Length: Chaptered
Warnings: Unbeta-ed

Summary: Kim Junsu is the son of a wealthy family. When the coffee company of his father is facing bankruptcy, he's forced to

Comments

[cutie_ass]

Oh my god u are soooo funnyXD u lite up my mood u know^^i do enjoy this fic as much as I enjoyed ur bitchyness keke luv u*sloppy kiss*

[sweetballads]

Hee, thanks for the compliments! <3 I'm happy this fic lights up your mood, that's what I intended to do while writing. XD Glad you liked it!

[missyoosu]

I won't be surprised if Yoochun does end up marrying his own ego. lol

The bitchy attitude of the narrator kind of got on my nerve a little bit in this chapter. She was okay in the first chapter. But don't pay me any attention. Just go with what the majority says.

Thanks for the awesome and long chapter update!

[sweetballads]

Haha, I wouldn't be surprised either!

And thanks for giving your honest opinion. ;p I think I'll try to do less narrator, more story in the next part. When I was writing, I was already hesitating if there was too much attitude of the narrator woven into the story but I couldn't really judge it. So thanks for giving me your opinion! <3

[awshin]

Haha, personally, no offence but I find the narrator "talking" too much. It can be a bit disruptive to the story. But that's just my own opinion. =) They have a 3rd party! Lol. Not like yoosu likes each other now... Thank you for posting this!

[sweetballads]

Oh yeah, a third party! I always tend to hate or find the second male lead annoying in dramas (except for Moon Jae Shin/Yoo Ah In in Sungkyunkwan Scandal BUT LET'S NOT TALK ABOUT MY LOVE FOR HIM OMG I COULD GO ON AND ON FOR FOREVER XD) but how is it possible to hate the second male lead when it's Changmin in this case? <3

And thanks for telling me what you actually thought about the narrator! I'll keep it in mind when writing the next chapter. :>

[ieie_luph]

yeah.. update.. ^^
omg, junsu meet changmin..
will min love su? lol
ouwh... chun, it's a little trouble, why you make it big?

[sweetballads]

Hee, I don't think I'd tell you too much when saying that Min will fall in love with Su ;) This fic is based on the average Korean drama, after all.

And yeap, Yoochun is quite the insensitive asshole for now. Things will change soon! Thanks for reading :D

[brebredh93]

You should put the narrator in parenthesis.

[sweetballads]

Thanks for the suggestion!

I don't think I'll do that though... I'm trying to let the story flow and the narrator is quite disruptive. I think it'll be even more disruptive if I'd put the narrator in parenthesis. Still, I appreciate your suggestion. <3