Chapter 9

[sweet_death27]

Title: A Desire for Innocence
Pairing: Benji centric, with some Benji/Joel and Benji/OMC
Rating: AU, NC-17
Summary: I loved their innocence and naivety; that's what was considered sensual to me. They didn't emanate sensuality and that was exactly why I adored them. Their lubricious nature was hidden inside their bodies, but if you paid attention

Comments

[kindofodd]

I never saw that coming!

"Decide now. Taste it later. Tell me, brother... Is it an adult or a baby that you really want?"

Oh. Yes. The boy wants them both, damnit! And so do you, Joel!

Once again, Melody. Amazing. Freaking amazing.

comexsweetxdeath (11:22:10 PM): (omfg I just imagined Dorian with braces lmao)

hehehe

[kindofodd]

I never saw that coming!

"Decide now. Taste it later. Tell me, brother... Is it an adult or a baby that you really want?"

Oh. Yes. Fuck yes. He wants them both! And so do you, Joel!

Amazing as usual, Mel :D There better not be such a long wait between chapters this time! *shakes menacing fist at you* Or no more making out through the glass! I'm serious! Don't MAKE me do that! lol.

comexsweetxdeath (11:22:10 PM): (omfg I just imagined Dorian with braces lmao)
heheheh

[kindofodd]

hahahahhahaha at least I can talk to you with the little phone nearby... and I can tell you how sexy you look all smashed up against that glass! Mm baby! lol :P

[like_a_movie]

ah! you know i love it. this is beautiful.

[heartstar]

hon, you know I love this story, especially if you take this the way I'm homing and Benji chooses Joel! *grins* keep writing, love it hon

[heartstar]

lol, I will, but I'm still hoping Benji choses Joel

[joelymoely]

Gah. No words, Mel. Seriously.

Joel stood up and turned his back on me, elbows for support on the window.

I can totally imagine Joel leaning on the window with that perfect pout on his face. 'Teh cute'.

I whispered between kisses, behind his ear, on his neck, all the places where his sweet aftershave still clung.

Mmm. Nummeh.

But there was that warm night breeze that spread itself under our skin and the yellow light of the lamp-posts that looked like tiny pearls when our vision was blurred.

Absolutely perfect description. Beautiful.

My brother glanced at me from his majestic position and touched my arm with feather fingers. I'm sure my tattoos felt the same shiver as I.

I loved those lines. Very complex and symbolic.

I don't think it should matter that there's children in this story. Sure, I understand it bothers some people but I think that if a story is written well enough, the age or anything else shouldn't have any effect on the reader's enjoyment.

Yay! I lub you a lot. <3

[joelymoely]

*hugs*

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