Insignificant

[amadareneko]

I wish I could still

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[anonymous]

Aw...this was really sad. I loved it though. The only thing that kind of threw me off a bit was the dashes in the first side thought/parantheses.

[acacia_r]

I like this one, Neko. It reminds me of the Pablo Neruda poem, about how he can write the saddest poem. Very beautiful, and very much true. The dashes and parentheses in "love" didn't throw me off at all. Actually, I was reading this one aloud and it sounded great like that- added a whole new dimension. I really like the last stanza. It's really gorgeous imagery and I can relate to it a lot.

[amadareneko]

puedo escribir los versos mas triste esta noche

I can see the resemblance, and I'm flattered ^-^