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mandysbitch in svuficathon04

Head Above Water for Diane

May 01, 2004 13:03

Title: Head Above Water
Recipient: Diane
Author: mandysbitch (cgb)
Website: Mind GamesCharacter/Pairing: Olivia/ Elliot ( Read more... )

Comments 8

aeonian May 1 2004, 20:27:09 UTC

Oooh. I can see this, definitely.

"You know I'd never hurt you, right? You know I couldn't do that?"

Spot on.

mandysbitch May 2 2004, 18:29:13 UTC

Oooh. I can see this, definitely.

I'm pleased to hear it. A lot of people said the dialogue rang true and that's quite a compliment. Thanks.

lawordersvufan September 16 2004, 19:44:21 UTC

very good fic

mandysbitch September 17 2004, 10:02:29 UTC

Thank you. :)

taj_mahal07 February 11 2005, 15:17:56 UTC

Really good fic! The dialogue was totally believable. Great characterizations! :)

mandysbitch February 13 2005, 12:22:03 UTC

Thank you. I'm really glad to hear you thought so. :)

waverly_place December 3 2006, 11:44:01 UTC

Wow, this was really good. I loved the interaction and the intensity wasn't over dramatic. Very believable and wonderfully in character for both of them.

*off to find if you've written other fics*

mandysbitch December 12 2006, 16:03:34 UTC

Thanks for the comments. And sorry to take so long to reply - I'm overseas at the moment and my internet access is limited.