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[captain_sam]

Title: Lost and Found
Recipient: lonejaguar
Author: captain_sam
Website: SVU Bonanza
Rating: PG-13 for violence and language; how I wish it were R for naughty naughty smut
Character/Pairing: Alex/Olivia
Warnings/Spoilers: "Loss." Of course.
Summary: Alex Cabot learns the hard way that she's the most wanted woman in the Colombian underworld.
Author's Note: thanks to mikee_pm

Comments

Please Don't Tease

[eclecticfan]

Wonderful, Superb, Awesome

PLEASE finish it

please, I'm not usually one with the begging, but you've woven such a wonderfully supspenseful tail and you stopped at the good part!!

I am very impatiently waiting for more

but this is terrific so far

kimly

PS - I think I;ve hit every major synonym for great

[heathers]

What a story! Totally high octane. The descriptions, the chases, the action played out just like a movie. You really got my heart pounding.

The transitions from past to present and back again were seamless. I loved the way each marshal had their own distinct style and the way Alex reacted to each of them differently.

I really really really hope you finish this.

-H

[aeonian]

Awesome. I felt like I was reading an Alex Cross novel or something. You need to hurry up and finish.

Great transitions through time. And wonderful lines like this one: "She and Olivia leapfrogged across traffic, which was already hectic though the sun had not yet cleared the tops of the skyscrapers."

Awesome.

Daaaamn

[lonejaguar]

Man, that was fantastic! I admire those who can write action because it's such a hard subject to get across, but that chase through the streets of NY was just awesome. Plus, please... Olivia kicking ass is my favourite kind of Olivia! Suspenseful and exciting... I'm so happy I found the time to finish reading it.

I hope you do continue... I'm loving where it's going!

Re: Daaaamn

[captain_sam]

Your icon made me laugh out loud.

And this was definitely supposed to be finished when I posted, but the ending I have in mind is going to take a few weeks to write properly. Much more ass-kicking and name-taking on the way.

Oh, and thanks.